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https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

I hope that link works

I am currently working on a book project that is an adaptation of a short film a friend of mine did. The first book is a beginning to the story and offers the background for his film that I will be putting into book form in the future. I decided to share it on goodreads to get some input on the direction its going. So far its just 3 chapters and I am working on a fourth. Thanks for your input and support.

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Eric wrote: "I am currently working on a book project that is an adaptation of a short film a friend of mine did. The first book is a beginning to the story and offers the background for his film that I will be..."

left a review in comment section... hope it helps :)
Looking good :)

Eric wrote: "I am currently working on a book project that is an adaptation of a short film a friend of mine did. The first book is a beginning to the story and offers the background for his film that I will be..."

I left my comments for the whole thing at chapter 3! :)
I hope my attempts at being as helpful I can aren't received as too harsh.

Short story I'm doing for this random contest on instagram. This is the third draft, so I figure it's time to try to get a bit of critique. Any feedback appreciated. Please don't hesitate to be critical or honest :)
(Don't be scared by the explicit warning. It's just to be safe because I used one single swear word.)

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Markus wrote: "Short story I'm doing for this random contest on instagram. This is the third draft, so I figure it's time to try to get a bit of critique. Any feedback appreciated. Please don't hesitate to be cri..."

Unfortunately, due to the explicit warning, I can not access, as I am under 18... XD
I'm sure someone will be able to help though. :)

Panic!AtTheWritingDesk wrote: "Markus wrote: "Short story I'm doing for this random contest on instagram. This is the third draft, so I figure it's time to try to get a bit of critique. Any feedback appreciated. Please don't hes..."

Oh, that's too bad. Maybe it would be okay to remove it? I don't know all the rules for this site, but maybe a swear word isn't too bad.

Markus wrote: "Panic!AtTheWritingDesk wrote: "Markus wrote: "Short story I'm doing for this random contest on instagram. This is the third draft, so I figure it's time to try to get a bit of critique. Any feedbac..."

I think it would be fine XD
I don't think one bad word is going to raise much alarm, and I've read MUCH worse that was, in fact, not censored and still posted so... \(o-0)/

Panic!AtTheWritingDesk wrote: I think it would be fine XD
I don't think one bad word is going to raise much alarm, and I've read MUCH worse that was, in fact, not censored and still posted so... \(o-0)/

Okay, done! You should be able to read it now :)

Yay! Thank you! ^-^

Panic!AtTheWritingDesk wrote: "Yay! Thank you! ^-^"

I replied to your comment. I don't know if you get notified, so I'll say it here too: Thank you very much! :) My story flows way better now.

Good stories people.

Thanks. :) I do believe that belongs in the Reveiws folder though... XD
JK
I don't really care anymore... XD
my life is pure insanity....

Panic!AtTheWritingDesk wrote: "Thanks. :) I do believe that belongs in the Reveiws folder though... XD
JK
I don't really care anymore... XD
my life is pure insanity...."

I think pure insanity is a tad better than insane purity, so you've got that going for you :D

Well stated XD
Unfortunately, it can be a bit overwhelming at times, but i suppose it is always an adventure... :)

Heres the beginning of my story. Hope you enjoy.

SHADOWSWORN 'An oath taken. A prophecy begun. A spirit reborn.'

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Jade wrote: "Heres the beginning of my story. Hope you enjoy.

SHADOWSWORN 'An oath taken. A prophecy begun. A spirit reborn.'

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/..."

((Left a review in comments!!! ^_^))

Okay... XD
Haven't been to THIS board in a while...
*takes a deep breath*
*sigh*
I just haven't written in so long, save for RPs, and I took down my previous writing because it made me feel insecure, odd, almost like I had dumped my soul into some sort of jar for everyone to gawk at...
IDK...
So I took the pages down but left the links up in case I wanted to start up again....
And here I am.
Starting again.
I hope someone will read and enjoy, even though it's only one page as of yet, but it's one page that I almost didn't write but had to because writing is a good way to let go of the constant "what if"s...
And, so, here is the link:
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
Feel free to leave comments and suggestions.
I feel like, even though this one isn't an original, it's going to be the one that gives me back the security I once felt in posting my writing, and I could really use feedback to improve the quality of my work so... Any and all suggestions welcome!
Sincerely,
P!ATWD

Hi, I'm writing for fun and would love feedback on my first chapter to see what readers want more of in the coming chapters. It's a new adult book. Link here: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Please leave me some comments of what you like and where I can improve and develop. Thank you so much in advance!

Lauren wrote: "Hi, I'm writing for fun and would love feedback on my first chapter to see what readers want more of in the coming chapters. It's a new adult book. Link here: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1..."

Hello, Lauren!
I left a comment for you on your story!
I don't know how constructive you will find my response, because I thought it was wonderful to read and going somewhere... XD
Wishing you the best of luck in your writing endeavors.
-P!ATWD