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message 1: by Julia (new)

Julia Turn your head
But don't look back.
Blink and you're dead.
Don't give up slack.
Use that lead
Eat your snacks,
Stop and you're dead.

Keep moving ahead
Think twice, never stop
Blink and you're dead.
If you must, drink that pop
But make sure you sleep in your bed
Not in a cupboard cuddling a mop.
Stop and you're dead.

Don't give up, even though some have fled
Push hard and fast.
Blink and you're dead.
This is something you can get past
It's all in your head.
Your doubts you must cast
Give up and you're dead.

Don't forget what you have read
For this is never truly the end.
Blink and you're dead.
If you look further, just around the bend,
You are starting to get ahead
Remember all you know, for yourself you must fend
Stop and you're dead.


message 2: by Julia (new)

Julia The punctuation is a bit off, I know.


message 3: by Julia (new)

Julia Thank you!


message 4: by Julia (new)

Julia Thanks!


message 5: by David (new)

David Hovland | 3 comments This is a serious poem which stimulates thought. The repetition of the line "Blink and your dead" is very effective. Keep up your good work!


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