The Wonderful World of Hogwarts—A Detailed And Advanced Roleplay discussion

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Cara

Full Name: Cara Ann MaCain
Gender: Female
Blood: Muggle-born
Age: 11
– Birthday: January 28
Appearance:
– Height: 4'4"
– Build: Fairly Skinny, strong legs and arms
– Hair: Bright orange, curly, goes down to the small of her back
– Eyes: Dark Brown
– Vocal Qualities: High
Persona (External): Sweet; loyal; brave; naive; artsy; happy-go-lucky; friendly; funny
Personal History: Cara was born and has lived all her life in the Irish countryside. Her dad and two older brothers work on their farm raising sheep. Her mom makes and sells artwork locally. She was pleasantly surprised to receive her letter, and her family was proud of her. However, they are simple people and didn't like the idea of her going away for the year especially to a big city like London.
Family: Brendan Eric MaCain (father; 45; Muggle); Marcy Ann MaCain (mother; 43; Muggle); Eric Sean MaCain (brother; 21; Muggle); Joseph Brendan MaCain (brother; 16; Muggle)


Owl

Name: Heidi
Gender: Female
Age: 9 months
Appearance:
Description: Heidi is a young Eagle Owl native to Cara's homeland. She has a mixture of different shades of brown and white feathers with dark amber eyes.


Wand

Wood:Spruce
Core:Diricawl feather
Length:10 7/8 inches
Flexibilty:Slightly bendy
Description:tba


Information Discovered/Developed In-Story:

Currently unavailable

For starters, please embed pictures and use the requested HTML formatting.

I am sorry, but how do I embed pictures?

If you look at the profile template, it should explain that if you read all the posts in that topic.

If, after reviewing that topic, you are still struggling, ask again.

It didn't work

You have to delete the period for it to work. I also see a semicolon in there, but I'm not sure what that's doing there...?

So for pictures:
<.img src="link">
^^You'll have to remove the period here to get it to work, but that should do the trick.

Also, the link for the owl is not working at the moment.

Picture example:

Oh, also you have to use the web address for the pictures specifically, rather than just the website. So for the picture of the girl you have to use this address:
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/f...

Don't worry, we can walk through this step by step and get this figured out. :)

fixed it thankyou

I'm getting "[image error]" for the owl's picture. :(

For the other stuff, the html formatting stuff? (Bolding and italicizing.) Same sort of thing. Follow my template, and remove the periods.

There we go now it should be right. Sorry.

Yep! Now for the bolding and italicizing...

Better?

Very much so. :) A few details, but we can get those later and you can create a topic for her in Ollivander's in the meantime?

Thanks

One more blank line under HOUSE

"Cara" should be underlined and there should be a blank line separating that from "Full Name".

Birthday: No "th" please.

More to come, but I'm installing stuff on my computer right now. She's looking good hon!

Good? For some reason it underlined everything I don't know why?

Did you include the end "<./u>" (minus the period)?

Okay now I think its ready.

Super, super, super close! I'm sorry for being a pest but I so appreciate your patience!


Vocal Qualities: Just list "High" because all we want are traits and also she is a little kid.

Personal History: Please capitalize the p of "personal History". Please spell out "2". In "her family were very proud", "were" should be "was". Btw, Hogwarts is not in London, it's in the middle of nowhere, the closest center of civilization being Hogsmeade.

Family: Space after the colon and before "Marcy" please. So the formatting for this is a little strange. Taking what you have I'm just gonna type it up the way I'm looking for—
Family: Brendan Eric MaCain (father; 45; Muggle); Marcy Ann MaCain (mother; 43; Muggle); Eric Sean MaCain (brother; 21; Muggle); Joseph Brendan MaCain (brother; 16; Muggle)

Instead of listing "Type of Animal: Owl" all we need is "Owl" and please underline that. (The underlined bits are basically separating the profile into different sections to make it easier to look at and get info from.)

Description (Pet): Space between the colon and "Heidi" please.

After Heidi's description, there should be two blank lines and then the word "Wand", underlined. Then another blank line between that and "Wood".

One more blank line between "Description" (Wand) and "Information Developed/Discovered In-Story" please.

Now it is done (I hope)

There need to be two blank lines before "Owl" and one blank line afterwards. Same thing with "Wand". (You have it formatted correctly with "Cara" and "Information Discovered/Developed In-Story".)

And with the —Hair: sort of bits, there should be a space between the en dash (–) and the italicized text.

THANK YOU SO MUCH <3

Better?

Yes ma'am! Just finish putting spaces after all of the — marks and your formatting will be spot on.

Done YAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Looks so good!!!! <3 Thank you so much for both your determination and patience!

Thankyou for your patience I am so excited to start RPing soon.

Now that I have been sorted and have my wand do you want me to write that information in? Also am I able to start RPing.

Definitely put the information in and update her House status.

And yes, you may!