Writer's Advice and Feedback Group discussion

Akane never really fit in with other girls her age. Her temper always seems to get the better of her; violently so. But now that she’s found a sanctuary for others like her, she's starting to realize that it might not be her fault after all.

However, the cure isn’t at all what she’s expected…

Genre: Psychological Horror, with Japanese elements
Audience: MA (violence, language, themes)
Link: https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

I will also be posting chapters here, but I will always update my Goodreads writing folder first.

Just a note: You may want to put those warnings in the topic title. There are several young teen members of this group that may not want to read such things (or at least their parents won't want them to read it).

Ooh, good idea. Thanks!

Like this?

Roxanne wrote: "Like this?"

Yep. That's perfect. (And what I would do were I in this situation. ^_- )

Thanks for pointing that out Lura!

Ali wrote: "Thanks for pointing that out Lura!"

You're welcome, Ali.

I'm not a parent (yet), but I know I wouldn't want my children to stumble onto something they weren't ready to read yet. Same thing for my nieces (ages 4, 19, and 23) or nephews (ages 4 and 23), none of which are currently in that potential danger zone, but once they are...

I can definitely see how it's an issue. Thank you very much for letting me know. :)