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(view spoiler)[ You could train yourself
To be able to dream
Beyond your wildest imagination
It could feel so real
Feeling excitement and joy
But not really seeing the reality
Comes to life whatever is on your mind
Even your worse fear could come in
Letting you see what you really need
Just a flash of the future in sleep
A way to get away from world
Trapped in a wonderland of tiredness
For it comes with a gift and curse
Remember it when you wake up
Or let it be forgotten forever
Many people want to follow their dreams
Others just go and live in it
The world behind your eyes
Is just for you to seek
During rapid eye motion
People seem to be able to critique
For my dreams are adventures
That continue when the book is down
They are there in the back of mind
Waiting for you to be found
The question from this truly is
Are you just going to fall asleep
And let your mind take control
For your wishes and desires
To become unfold
Or make the dream real
Using courage that won't conceal
While being a leader after all (hide spoiler)]

I like this poem, especially the ending.

Thank you!

You should write more poetry.

Thanks!

Your poem is very beautiful. It voices almost exactly what I think about dreams.

Cool! Thank you for reading my poem, I cannot wait to read yours!