Beta Reading Group for Marita A. Hansen discussion

Chapter 2's discussion page.

I will be sending this chapter out today.

YESSSSSSSS

Perfect chapter loved it all. Loved that Lucy is shy but then when she gets a thought into her head she is strong and says it. Ps totally loved the top tight bottom on her skirt paragraph the fact she had to leave it undone,god what women hasn’t had to do that at some point in her life hahaha.

Emma carruthers wrote: "Perfect chapter loved it all. Loved that Lucy is shy but then when she gets a thought into her head she is strong and says it. Ps totally loved the top tight bottom on her skirt paragraph the fact ..."

Thanks, Emma :) I'm editing Riley's chapter right now :)

I read chapter one and two and I really like it!
I didn’t notice any mistake or something wrong \o/ green light for me. Waiting for the third chapter because that end was cliffhanger 😂

Julieta wrote: "I read chapter one and two and I really like it!
I didn’t notice any mistake or something wrong \o/ green light for me. Waiting for the third chapter because that end was cliffhanger 😂"

Thanks, Julieta :) I'll be sending out Chapter 3 soon, just finishing things up.

I dont think i receive chapter two.

carinne wrote: "I dont think i receive chapter two."

I'll go send it to you now, along with Chapter 3.

Thanks!

carinne wrote: "Thanks!"

You're welcome :)