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New Writers looking for Feedback > Wanna kill a guy? You can, I am going to let you.

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message 1: by Hillary (last edited Nov 20, 2014 10:20PM) (new)

Hillary Marek (maliceon) | 1 comments I posted a novel, my first suspense, thriller, on my website last month. Usually I get a ton of feed back from my fans be it good, bad, or indifferent they always have SOMETHING to say. This time not so much. I want to warn you the novel is about an aging playboy photographer who is a sociopath with a BDSM lifestyle. He thinks the world owes him and everything he desires rightfully should be his. I based him slightly off Dorian Gray. He slept his way to the top rankings of NYC fashion industry and now in his late 30's (and no longer desired by the female chief editor who paved his way to the top.) is focusing his attention on a young journalist who makes him feel powerful and inspired again. She becomes his muse his obsession and his reluctant submissive. Until she meets an equal, a bartender that makes her feel the butterflies she has been waiting for. But our resident bad boy is not giving up on the woman he has made his obsession. Things get bad, then dangerous, then quickly turn scary. One will die. One will lose. One will never be the same. Here is chp. 1-5 Great Sexpectations IF you like it and would like me to finish it please tell me. If you think it should go in another direction, tell me that as well. I have 3 possible endings all written out. One death scene for each main character, Bartender, Photographer, Writer, no one is safe. However the ending will be %100 fan chosen.
SO.....My fragile little ego is holding hands with my rapidly beating heart awaiting your response.
Love and Hostages,
Maliceon Books


message 2: by Jordan (new)

Jordan (jjtrippy) Your book sounds really interesting! I'd be glad to read it!

Yours,

Jordan


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