Aspiring Writers Group...a creative writing group discussion

Great start. Make sure you include what happened in the next direct part. It sounds like a murder thriller mystery and I can't wait to see more.

It’s a really good start! Now you just need to figure out what Kit’s reaction to this would be. Is he in total denial? Does he see her everywhere? Does he think it’s murder? Does he think it’s suicide? Is he one hundred percent completely sure she’s alive, maybe complete with some evidence?