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message 1: by smile, WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY?! (last edited Apr 17, 2020 01:26PM) (new)

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message 2: by geoflame || inactive :( (last edited Apr 11, 2020 06:24AM) (new)

geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments characters so far:
-stone-cold saucy lesbian

i propose:
no main character. shared pov. what do you think?


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Yeah, I like that. Are we doing the individual povs in 1st person?


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments hm. i always write in third person past tense out of habit, what about you?


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) I usually use 1st person. Sometimes I try to write in 3rd person, but then I get into the "writer's zone" or whatever and start writing in 1st without realizing it. I can write 3rd person though, I just have to concentrate.


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) *gives overly long explanation for a little thing*


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments oh my god it's the same thing for me but the other way around? how 'bout we just each write how we normally write and once we're done with the story we can go back and see which pov makes more sense and just edit it to fit that?


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Sure! Sounds good?

Also, for our only current planned character, how about the name Blue Eternity Sallow?


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments Oh
wow
hmm
gimme a sec


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments what do you think the naming conventions are in this world?


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments naming conventions

like in some cultures, you name someone after their father or a middle name is always the name of their mother or something like that. also for whatever common names are.

for instance, people might be named by whatever words are left from previous society, so brand and object names might be used as names.


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments i really like blue as a first name tho


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments found a last name that means sallow tree

McNair

also here are some brand names that could also work as names:
-google
-adobe
-nokia
-toyota
-fedex
-ebay
-mcdonald
-lego
-nike
-apple
-visa

and celebrity names that are so widespread they'd survive-
-chris
-tom
-jennifer
-elvis
-michael
-emma
-john
-peter
-david
-robert
-jason
-kevin
-billie
-aaron
-george
-ann
-jessica
-patricia
-mike
-bobby
-tony

and then there's the thing about gender connotation? is tony considered female? gender neutral? could google be considered strictly a male name?


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) So we're thinking company names, hm? That works. What if we did birds too? Like, birds survived the apocalypse better than humans did so now they're seen as symbols of hope or something?


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) That way, Blue could fit as a name


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments oh i love that so much. that's so poetic. maybe that could be a recurring them through the story too.


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Yeah, exactly! So Blue could be for Blue Jay, and mYaybe we could have a character named Raven or Sparrow…

Is it just me, or does Sparrow kinda sound like a masculine name?


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments I feel like it's used a lot as a feminine name but I feel like it's either masculine or gender neutral


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) So, sidenote here, where do tghe characters live?


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments hmm. well since this is post-post-apocalypse, maybe there's a bit more structure. i guess there might be rough approximations of houses. California probably has it pretty good since all their houses are practically built for the apocalypse i hear. maybe there are grouped tents and shelters that pass for "neighbourhoods"??


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Sounds good.

Okay, so - the story so far:

~After the apocalypse
~Birds are symbols of hope
~Tents/shelters in neighborhoods
~Characters are gonna go somewhere, do something, and yeah


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments maybe we could pull a wizard of oz, the characters meet up while looking for something and when they finally think they're found it it turns out it was a metaphor


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Just had a bootiful idea


We need a talking AI

BUT IT'S A REFRIGERATOR THAT CONSTANTLY YELLS AT PEOPLE TO EAT VEGETABLES


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) And it's bright orange


message 27: by smile, WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY?! (new)

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XD


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments ɖǟռɢɛʀօʊֆ ɖǟʀɨռɢ ɖǟʊռȶʟɛֆֆ ɖǟɢɢɛʀ wrote: "And it's bright orange"

yes yes yes!


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) I'm serious. Just imagine this.

You're walking back to the neighborhood, and you're starving. It's been a long day. You walk into the communal kitchen to grab, I dunno, a chocolate bar or something. You grab the handle of the bright orange refrigerator, and it immediately screams, "EAT YOUR VEGETABLES!!!" as you open it. You slam the door closed, about to nope outta there, and it shouts, "AY!!! WATCH THE DOOR, KID!!!"


message 30: by smile, WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY?! (new)

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AHAHAHA!


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments i had an idea for like a tinker character

and they have a big scary name and everyone talks about them with reverence
but it turns out they're like super tiny and petite and they're just really strong/good at their job


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Ooh, yeah!

What if they're, like, five?


message 33: by smile, WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY?! (new)

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XD


message 34: by geoflame || inactive :( (last edited Apr 19, 2020 11:03AM) (new)

geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments mm..
five is too young but maybe like
8-10 and also super tiny in general. like my sister had a friend who's the same age as her but everyone thinks she's in first grade bc she's so tiny. not super short, but just a combo of kinda short, petite, and a really high pitched voice.


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Gotcha. That makes sense.

So, what gender is this hooman-child


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments i rolled a d4:
enby child, probly they/them

i just imagine a tiny kid with one of those huge welding masks and a leather apron and then they turn and flip the mask up and it's this gap-toothed baby face standing on a stool.


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Yes

Very much yes


((Kinda reminds me of Harley from the Heroes of Olympus))


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments {{yeah kinda. but with less deadly weapons and more cool talking refrigerators}}


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) {{Yeah}}

Maybe the name Xantheous?


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments yes- or- wait- hear me out-
















elvis


message 42: by smile, WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY?! (new)

smile (smileyfox) | 217 comments Mod
XD


message 43: by smile, WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY?! (new)

smile (smileyfox) | 217 comments Mod
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) We need to work on this


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) And I kinda completely forgot about it


geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments 's chill
let's do it


message 49: by dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (last edited May 01, 2020 09:21AM) (new)

dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Okyay so:

~Blue, the resident don't-give-a-f(nope) lesbian (she/her)
~Elvis, the tiny engineer child (they/them)
~McFridge, the bright orange talking refridgerator (Supreme lord of broccoli/carrots)

Other ideas for characters:

~Star/Starling, the one who's way too energetic and optimistic, possible ship with Blue (she/her)

~Sparrow, the one who flirts with literally everybody (He/him)

~McFreezer, the kid sibling to McFridge (They/them)

~Adobe, that kid who knows everything about everything (gender is currently undecided)

~Dog, the neighborhood cat

~Cat, the neighborhood dog


message 50: by geoflame || inactive :( (last edited May 01, 2020 06:54AM) (new)

geoflame || inactive :( (ummmmmmmmmmm) | 82 comments i love this all of it
also, could we debate names for harper bc there's another character named harper who's hmmm and i find it really hard to extract her from any other character named harper


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