I have written a modern version of Romeo and Juliet and published as an e-book.
Would be grateful for any opinions or reviews.
For example act 2 scene 2:
"O Romeo, Romeo! Wherefore art thou Romeo? Deny thy father and refuse thy name. Or, if thou wilt not, be but sworn my love, And I'll no longer be a Capulet."
I have changed to:
"O Romeo, Romeo! What is thy name, thou Romeo? Deny thy father and to refuse thy name; Or, if thou wilt not, be but sworn my love, Then I’ll no longer be a Capulet."
The e-book is called "Romeo ans Juliet a modern version" and it is on Amazon.
I have written a modern version of Romeo and Juliet and published as an e-book.
Would be grateful for any opinions or reviews.
For example act 2 scene 2:
"O Romeo, Romeo! Wherefore art thou Romeo?
Deny thy father and refuse thy name.
Or, if thou wilt not, be but sworn my love,
And I'll no longer be a Capulet."
I have changed to:
"O Romeo, Romeo! What is thy name, thou Romeo?
Deny thy father and to refuse thy name;
Or, if thou wilt not, be but sworn my love,
Then I’ll no longer be a Capulet."
The e-book is called "Romeo ans Juliet a modern version" and it is on Amazon.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B089S5ZQGR
Yours sincerely,
Andrew