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Project 49

They asked us to sacrifice ourselves for their experiment. Finally, when only one teen volunteered they said they would chose themselves. They told us to meet at the Center. They chose seven people from each city. I am one of the seven from Cress. All of us seven will either die or spend the rest of our lives controlled by the Center. I am not willing to live my life controlled. I will fight until I get my way.
My name is Sarah Lee and I am the only one left in my family. I am 16 and I will never let the Center control me. They will try to make me weak but I will be made stronger. They will try to kill me but they will be the ones killed. I will bring them down.

Is that like a prologue to one of your stories? That is amazing! I like how you repeat the same sentence structure, and I am curious as to what happens in the rest of the story. Good job! :)

Yup! It is a prologue! I am so excited to finish Project 49! I am SOOOOOOO glad that you like it! I will have to post some more of this story here!

Are you working on any stories or novels?

Ooh I would love to read more! :)
And no, I'm actually not working on anything at the moment, but I've been coming up with some ideas so no doubt I'll be starting one soon :)

YAY! If you want, you can give me your email and i can send you some more of my work (more than i will post here!)
If you don't want to that is fine!! Message me it if you want!

I'd love to see more, I will inbox you my email :)

:) Thanks!

That is really cool! Good job!

No prob!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/22160701...


^that there is a story i wrote. Right now its only up to 4 chapter because noy many people have read it and im still stuck. Plus i dont know if its even good. So read if you want. Warning it may be nothing good. Im more an artist then a writer but i tried ;)

{first page}
Running chasing shouting the usual. Once again the madhatter was running through the red queens garden with card guards at his heels. This time something was different. He was growing old. He couldn't keep up anymore. The card guards might actually win this time. He fell to the ground shivering. Something was wrong he was dying the poision had finally kicked in as the guards covered him in silver shining shackles he thought of his beautiful late wife Alice and his daughter Maddi. Alice had insisted n the name right before she had died. She died a few days after Maddi had been born. Mr Hatter had only held Maddi once before he sat with his wife on her deathbed. He remembered that day as clear as polished glass. Alice was in tears as the faries gracefully flew into the room in their small cottege near the whispering woods. They were there to grant Alice her dying wish, what she did next broke the madhatter inside and out. She told him that her dying wish was for Maddi to have a normal life one wihout all this well madness Maddi was whisked out of the Madhatters arms and into the normal world a world without him.

does it suck?

https://intothemindofareader.wordpres...

^my most recent writing, any feedback would be greatly appreciated, I hope you enjoy it

Summer {in 900 years of time and space i've never met anyone who wasn't important} wrote: "{first page}
Running chasing shouting the usual. Once again the madhatter was running through the red queens garden with card guards at his heels. This time something was different. He was growing..."

Cool!

IRE

Rising, falling
Compromising, then squalling
Fists flash, peace dashed
Nothing but stalling

Frown, turned to sneer
Is returned with a jeer
Just short of mauling

Took the blows
Then tears flowed
The fight slowed
Back to their dwelling

Cool!

Thanks Haley
Lucia I love the poem

:) Thanks Summer

I love your chicken pic too I love chickens!!!

^o^

I haave a chicken named Fluufy and carlos and marshmellow (hes white) and I had one named pumpkin but she died :( and I have a ton of other ones

I have 9 chickens. The one in my profile picture is Lily. She died last November:(

Wow, that is a lot of chickens! i live in the city and don't have any pets.

I live in the suburbs

cool!

Eh, it's kind of boring actually. That's why I want to travel around the world when I'm older

aw im sorry :( she was really cute though I need to show you guys a pic yesterday my rooster buddy jr climbed up on my horse and it was so cute sorry for the AWFUL pics my phone https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/... lemme know if you cant follow the link (im on an old computer)

Oh...I hope you will be able to travel around the world!

Dang.....link didn't work

Let's keep this conversation going but lets go the the chat topic!

Truth lies
around me
In tiny
bits and
pieces
I look
until I
find them
like a quick
cure from
measles
I hunger
for that
truth
like a
streetrat hungers
food
And if
I do
not get
it
you will
fear my
dreadful mood
I tolerate
no deception
no lies
of any
sort
for truth
is my
armor
I will
not be
misunderstood

coolio I like that

Well right now I'm working on a story called the Golden Sword, but I'm only on Chapter Two. I was thinking of posting it on Goodreads, but I haven't yet.

Cool!

Gabby, yours seems awesome! ((Inspired by Warriors?))

Grain of Sand

Grain of sand
Pitiful, weak
Never a hand
Can shift a beach
Single penguin
Dead from cold
Lonely wolf
Weak and old
Quiet raindrop
Storm untold
Leaf dies quickly
Tree lives long
A person is weak
A village is strong


Well, poetry is harder than I expected, but what do y'all think?

I really like it!!!

Wow you guys are all like creative genii! I might post a few of my songs but until then you can check out some of my writing if ya'll want. It's on my account on GoodReads.

Oooh the suspense of the first chapter is brilliant :) I also love the personification of Misty, it's very effective xxx

This a wee tune I've been working on. It's in the key of C# minor, or E.

Verse 1
She's bubbly, she's beautiful,
smart, a little crazy.
The outside,
shows what she wants you to see.
Sad, small,
troubled and insecure,
the inside shows
there's so much more.

Verse 2
She wants to hide it,
she shows no weakness,
when she's really,
wishing you could see tha-a-at,
the outide,
is just a ruse,
a way to hide, and not to lose.

Chorus
'Cause she's got two faces,
one she always shows,
the other on the inside,
for no-one else to know,
bottled up inside her,
yet always there,
the tears of the second face,
hide away with no-one to care.

Verse 3
Please won't you help her,
the girl with two faces,
'Cause though she's far from,
being someone hated,
she's all alone,
trapped inside her mind,
hopefully waiting,
for somebody to find,

Her two faces... (chorus)

Bridge
Her friends,
can't understand,
why she's feeling so damn
depressed,
and useless.
So slow down,
take a step back,
see behind her dry eyes,
and realise...

That she's got two faces... (Chorus x 2)

Rachelle wrote: "Here's my first song:

Verse 1
Berfore I met you, my heart was locked and empty.
Feels like there's a missing peice inside of me.
You came along so I choose to welcome you in,
Yes you are the missi..."
that sounds like mah life. it touched my heart. make a youtube account so me can here you sing this

Okay this is just a little thing me and my friends sing about the people from Terminus in the Walking Dead and it's soooooooo dumb but I cannot resist singing it every time so idk I'll share it with you. It's to the tune of Animals by Maroon Five

Bobby we're preying on you tonight, hunt you down eat you alive, just like cannibals, cannibals like cannibals-bals

Rachelle wrote: "Yeah, I wrote that for my bf's bday gift last yr. Didn't sing it to him yet XD..."

Awwww that's cute!

This is a song I wrote back in October 2013...

~Miss Nobody~


Girl, do you remember that girl who was your bestie?
Two inseparables?
Do you remember how you ditched her for the Popular Crowd?
Now I'm nothing, in no crowd...

Yeah, I'm Miss Nobody
I may have flesh & bone
But it's if I'm a ghost
Miss Nobody
Ignorance is not bliss
Yeah, yeah
Miss Nobody

Boy, do you remember that girl who liked you?
Y'all were close till you found out
You fell for her enemy in a fit of anger & fear
It certainly made her drown in tears
Now I'm in the background
But I'm dying to come out....

Yeah, I'm Miss Nobody
I may have flesh & bone
But it's if I'm a ghost
Miss Nobody
Ignorance is not bliss
Yeah, yeah
Miss Nobody

Breathe in, breathe out
If I'm a ghost, I guess I'll freak you out
Breathe in, breathe out
If I'm a ghost, I guess I'll freak you out
Breathe in, breathe out
Breathe in, breathe out,
If I'm a ghost, I'll guess I'll freak you out


Yeah, I'm Miss Nobody
I may have flesh & bone
But it's if I'm a ghost
Miss Nobody
Ignorance is not bliss
Yeah, yeah
Miss Nobody

Oh whoa whoa...

Rachelle wrote: "@ Hannah: *blush* thnx! our yr anniversry is in 3 months!

And cool song lori!"

Thanks Rachel! I love your song!

Rachelle wrote: "ty so much! I can't believe so many people like my song."

Well you're talented!

Eleanor wrote: "This a wee tune I've been working on. It's in the key of C# minor, or E.

Verse 1
She's bubbly, she's beautiful,
smart, a little crazy.
The outside,
shows what she wants you to see.
Sad, small,
tro..."

I like it!

thanks XD xx

:)

Here's Caught OUtside, in it's most raw and unexpanded form. I'm working on expansion right now, so expect more later.\
When I was little, I went out to watch the sunset every night. My mother would carry me outside, set me on the deck railing, and gaze lovingly at the sky. It happened like that every night. I never saw my father. He lived somewhere else, and Mom wouldn't tell me where. She said he'd come home someday. I believed her, since I had nothing else to believe. But then everything changed. I was four then. I asked Mom if she was coming to watch the sunset with me. She said no, in a much sterner voice than usual. I shrugged my shoulders and reached for the doorknob. Mom screamed and slapped my hand away from the doorknob. I ran off to my room crying, yelling about how she didn't care about my feelings. When I came out the next morning, I found she had locked all the doors. We received all of our food, free, through a vacuum tube from men in space suits. Our house was built watertight and airtight. Whatever intoxicated the atmosphere couldn't get in. We lived like that for eleven years. I buried myself in crafts as an escape. Our house was filled with useless doodads we couldn't throw away. And then Mom got sick. Hopelessly sick. I'm-gonna-die-in-six-months sick.