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**based on KOTLC**


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Steffi walks around the bend quickly. She’s hurrying to get to her friend Calypso’s house. The pair have never met in person, but Steffi’s so excited she could burst.

Calypso paces back and forth anxious for Steffi to arrive but nervous that her brother's will get in the way. Just then she hears a knock and springs up to answer it.
"H-hello," she says with a smile on her face.

Steffi is standing on the porch, tugging on her choppy short hair. She smiles, a dimmed brightness in her blue eyes. Over the years, Steffi has seen more than she needs to, and is lucky she even has any happiness left in her.

"Come in!" Caly says with a welcoming smile. She showed her around her room. "I have too many fairy lights for my own good," Calypso says jokingly.

Steffi smiles again. “Nah, you’re good. I used to want--?” Steffi stutters as a portal opens in the middle of Calypso’s bed. The gaping hole seems to have stairs.

Calypso's eyes light up and she looks like she is going to jump in. "We have to go Steffi!" She says excitement written across her features.

“Uhhareyoucrazy??” Steffi slurs. Just then, a head of strawberry blonde hair pops up. “Oh. Is this Earth?” Dex asks.

"Yes," she said addressing both Steffi and Dex. Caly grabbed her messager bag, guitar, journal and some books. "We have to go!" Calypso said her face bright and determined. She started jumping up and down on the balls of her feet her frizzy brown hair bobbing along. She was ready to jump it, but not without Steffi.

Steffi grins, being the reckless girl she is. She grabs Caly’s hand and they race through the gaping black hole.

She jumps in head feet first ready for an adventure of a life time. She smiles at Steffi, "Ready!"

Steffi smiles back, and they tumble into the ground. “Um. Hi. I’m D-” Dex starts to say.

"Calypso! But you can call me Cal!" She says to Dex. Caly gives Steffi a look like 'can-you-belive-it-this-is-crazy-KOTLC-is-real'

“And I’m Steffi. Nice to meet you. Where’s Sophie and the others?” Steffi asks with a manic grin.

"O-others?" Dex said confused.

"Yeah like Tam!" Calypso chimes in with an equal manic grin.

“But we like you too, don't worry.” Steffi says with a wink.

Calypso tries to hold back a laugh. "Yeah of course we like you!" Caly said smiling brightly

Dex blinks. “okaaaaaay. How do you know where you are?”


Calypso thrust her arms in her messenger bag and pulled out her phone, looked up her audiobook collection of keeper of the lost cities then showed Dex.

“I’m SO confused right now.” Dex starts muttering to himself. “This is what I get for using one of my gadgets.”

Calypso laughs “Well…” she says thinking “Let’s go!” Dex led the way to wherever they were going.

“So…. what are your names?” Asks Dex.

"Calypso but feel free to call me Cal!" Calypso says enthusiastically

“Okay. Hi, Cal. I’m Dex, but somehow you already know me. Are you a telepath?”

Calypso laughed "No!" She said "You are one of my favorite book characters" Cal says smiling brightly as ever.

“Huh. Sophie should be able to fix this. What’s it like on Earth?”

"Well Earth is alright I guess...We have good music!" Calypso says honestly

“Like what? I have a gadget that connects me to this thing-y called spotify!” He says

"HAMILTON!" Calypso says with way to much enthusiasm "I mean um- H-hamilton is alright I guess"

“Uh-huh. How about you, Steffi?” He asks. “I like this girl named Sabrina Carpenter.”

"Where are we going?" She asked observing all of the shops.

“We’re going to Sophie’s house.” Dex said, grabbing their hands.

Cal starts fangirling. "NO! FRICKIN'! WAY!" she smiles widely.

Dex smiles back and light leaps them away.

Calypso, Steffi and Dex arrive at Havenfield. “Aces…” Cal says observing the long stretch of green field, the mass amount of mythical creatures, the panakes tree with its branches fluttering softly in the wind. The tall glass building a mix between elegance and chaos with the golden house. Overlooking the ocean and vast-expanses of the pastures fenced-in. Her breath hitched at the sight before her.

“Welcome to-” Dex starts.

"Havenfeild--" Calypso cuts him off with a breathless word

“YOU KNOW THAT TOO???!!” Dex screams.

Calypso waves the book in front of him. "Yup!" She says smiling

Dex shakes his head and sighs.

Calypso pets the cover a bit. "T-they are good books…" she says honestly.

“SO who do you have a crush on?” Dex asks.

“Wouldn’t you want to know.” she says with a smirk.

“Okay. I just want to make sure you don't have one on me. I like Linh.”

“Awwwww…” Cal says fangirling. “No I don’t have a crush on you.” She said adding emphasis on 'you'.

“She has one on Tam (like me)” Steffi says, smiling

Calypso blushed. “Steffi!” she says playfully. It was true she did have a crush on Tam.

Steffi had a crush on Tam, also, but wasn’t about to admit that. “So, Dex, how do you like saving the world?” She asked. ((Oooh love triangle XD))

Calypso looked eager for him to answer. She had spent her entire life searching for something more than this boring and mundane world. "Do you think that we would be able to help you?" Calypso said excitedly.

“Uh. Well I didn’t like it at first, but i'm happy to help.” ((we’re at HF so do you want to bring on another KOTLC person? YEAH! Let's do sophie Grady and ediline then after HF we can go crash a tergins place))

Just then Sophie came out. "Hey Dex! Who are these?" She said gesturing towards Steffi and Calypso. Cal smiles "I-I'm Calypso b-but you can call m-me Cal!"

“I’m Steffi, That’s Caly, and we’re from the Forbidden Cities!” Steffi Exclaims.

Sophie's jaw drops "Come in..we have much to discuss." She said cutting a glance at Dex. Caly looks at Steffi asking a silent question.

“Uhh. Sorry, Soph. I don’t think you’re really the mysterious miss foster.” Steffi says, backing away.

Calypso looks at Steffi. "Trust me," Sophie says. Cal gives the slightest of nods as if saying 'let's follow her but be on our guard.'

Steffi held her ground. “What did Keefe say to you the first time you met?”

"You're not supposed to be here!" She said with confidence.
“He asked if you were lost, imposter.”
Cal looked at Steffi, they bolted.
((DUDE I ONLY GET 3 A NIGHT I SWEAR MOST DAYS IM A ZOMBIE oooooooosH!))
“WHAT DO WE DO???!!” Steffi pants, running.
"Tergin's place" Caly said, keeping a level head. "We go to Tergin's place and think about our options there!" She said kind of rushed. She pulled out Dex's light leaper throwing a guilty glance his way. They leapt away.

They tumble out into...actually, Steffi didn’t know where. (pretty sure humans can't light leap idk a human has never tried to light leap before)

Calypso handed the light leaper to Dex. "H-here" she said guilty "Can you t-take us to Tergin's...please" Caly said with a half hearted smile at the end.
Dex smiles back, seeming dazed. “Sure.” They leap to Tergins.

They appear at Tergin's place with Tam, Linh and Wylie standing in the doorway...as if they were expected.

“Welcome, Calypso. Steffi. We’ve been expecting you for quite a long time.” Della said, stepping from the shadows.

They jump back in surprise “h-how did you know…??”

“We know a lot of things. Such as… you both are elves.” Tam turns and smiles at Calypso. “You have noticed you’ve been called to fires, right?” He then turns to Steffi. “And you… are a Shade. But you already knew that.”

Keefe steps out of the shadows. “And we didn’t want to come to you and say, “take my hand Calypso, let me show you where you truly belong.” he gives a weak smile.


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Calypso looks at Steffi for assurance, "but how can I trust you?" She said remembering the last Keefe that they ran into.
((wow good job!))


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"The question is...." He pushes off the wall with a smirk. "How CAN you trust me?"


message 5: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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"I--," Calypso says hesitantly. "give me one second," she pulled Steffi and her out if earshot.


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"What is it" Steffi asks


message 7: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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"I trust your judgment, di you believe them?" Calypso said with an air if foreboding.


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"i think so. Keefe's smirk cant be faked, at least." Steffi smiled.


message 9: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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Caly gave a small laugh, "well then, let's go!" She turned towards them and nodded.


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"Alright!"


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Della, Tam, and Keefe lead the way to who knows where. "so--" Cal started, she fell face first into the dirt. Calypso sat up with a groan " It's okay, floor broke my fall."


message 12: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((just to make it more realistic LOL))


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((XD))
Keefe reaches over with a smirk. "Worse than Foster." Keefe helps her up, holding on to her hand a second longer than needed.


message 14: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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"Right, thanks" she pulls her hand away. "Anyway where exactly are we going?" Calypso asked curiously.


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"I think they're just admiring you." Steffi says with a smirk almost Identical to Keefe's.


message 16: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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Caly looks aghast and confused. "I- I don't know, I hope not."


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Steffi smirks again, and this time Caly sees the similarities between Keefe and her friend


message 18: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((Siblings? or just in personality? or both?))


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((Sibs, half brother))


message 20: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((Nice!))

Cal's eyebrows furrows, as if she is calculating something.


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"What, Calypso?" Della asks, frowning.


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"You said that we are elves, right?" Calypso said suspiciously. "Does that mean we have family here, maybe a brother or sister?" she asked implying that Keefe and Steffi were related.


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"Yes, you do, calypso. You.... well. um." Tam said.


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"Who?" Calypso asked.


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"yourfathersfintan"


message 26: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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"and Steffi?" she said trying not to think about her father.


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"Brant and Lady Gisela"


message 28: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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"Well then!" she said with false amusement, "I guess both of our parents are evil! That- that's BRILLIANT!" Caly said laying the sarcasm on thick.


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"welcome to the club." Keefe laughs darkly. (gtg byeeeeeeeeeeeee)


message 30: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((BYE! let me know when you can write again!!!))


message 31: by Calypso ♡ (new)

Calypso ♡ | 193 comments Mod
"Yeah," Calypso said. "Anyway, where are we going again?"


message 32: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((I am ready if you are))


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((Might try coming up with some ideas later but i gtg))


message 34: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((No problem! just post 'em when you got 'em))


message 35: by Calypso ♡ (new)

Calypso ♡ | 193 comments Mod
((I have an idea if you don't have on yet))


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((what is it????))


message 37: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((They can be taking us to the black swan hideout))


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((ooh good idea))


message 39: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((Thanks do you want to start))


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((sure)) "Well, calypso, Steffi, We're taking you to a place you both know."


message 41: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((I willbe back at 12 15 ish))


message 42: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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Her eyes light up in exitment. "You don't mean, do you?" Calypso said with anticipation.


message 43: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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Ever since she read about the Black Swan's hideout in the book she dreamt about going there.


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Della breaks into a beautiful grin. "You guessed it!"


message 45: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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Cal turned towards Steffi, "This is it!" she said with an bright smile.


message 46: by Calypso ♡ (new)

Calypso ♡ | 193 comments Mod
((We need more Steffi input XD))


message 47: by Calypso ♡ (new)

Calypso ♡ | 193 comments Mod
((can we agree never to go to Atlantic please [I can't wear a dress even if it is just in a story]))


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((XD sure ))

"Yeah. Sure." Steffi seemed to be lost in thought.


message 49: by Calypso ♡ (new)

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((oh thank gosh))

She lurked back a bit, just enough for them to be out of earshot. "What is wrong? Don't deny it, tell whats wrong" Calypso said


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"Well. This is a bit much, you know? I mean, just an hour ago we thought this place was just a book."


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