Kingdom Of Eloral {{Semi-Advanced}} discussion

Fiel was in a cell, beaten, stabbed and raped, she laid there, blood pooling.

"Fiel?" A desperate voice calls out. "Please tell me you're here," she sobs.

She was crying a bit.

"Fiel! Oh god," she cries. "No, no, no," Monica screams "SOMEONE COME HELP HER!"

((I'm gonna cry ahhh))

"Am fine.." She said quietly. The keeper came over. "What are you doing down here?" She asked to Monica.

"My girlfriend," she sobs. "Get someone to help. As your captain that is an ORDER." she screams. He goes off. "Oh, babe, I'm so sorry."

"Mam, I hate to say this but she was put here by somebody claiming to be acting on royal orders, I would need a member of the royal family to let me let her out." She replied. "Plus you realize she is a slave right, why care for a slave?"

"She's a member of the royal guard, and that person was lying. They were a random person. I am captain of the guard and will make you lose your job if you don't bust help RIGHT NOW!" she cries. "Ahh, it's gonna be okay," she tells her, voice cracking.

"Mam, I'm sorry but I really am not allowed to do that, if I'm wrong they will hang me." She stated bluntly. "Then they will kill my kids as well." She didn't seem to have much in the ways of emotion.

"I'll take your place," she blurts. "Just please. Help her," Monica states desperately.

The keep was having none of this. "Go ask one of the royals please, I'm sure if your the captain of the guard they will listen to you, although I don't know why you are trying to free a filthy elvish slave." She said.

Monica punches him in the face and runs off to get the royals. She returns with a letter. "It's real. Now HELP HER," she screams.

((Same))

"Ok then." She said, unlocking the cell but not doing anything else.

"GET SOMEONE TO HELP OR I'LL HAVE YOU FIRED," she screeches and he hurries off. "Babe what happened? Oh god, I'm sorry," she whimpers.

Fiel was gently sobbing, a medic went over, took one look at her ears and walked off.

Monica cries. "I'm so sorry," she sobs. "It's all my fault.'

Fiel passed out in her arms, she had stabilized medically but passed out from stress.

Monica starts to sob over her limp body. "Th-thank you," she gets out. She carries Fuel carefully to Monica's room and sets her on the bed. "I love you," she whispers. "I'm so sorry."

Fiel gently tried to hug her.

((I'll comment on her room))

Tristan is thrown into a cell, stripped of his pants and shirt.

Dahlia runs down the stairs to the cell. "Tristan!" She says.

Tristan looks up and run to the bars. "Dahlia," he says.

"Hi!" She says kneeling next to the cell. "I will get you out of here." She says.

Tristan shakes his head. "No. You'll lose your job."

"I don't care about that. I care about you! Saving you I mean..." She says

Tristan smiles. "I'll figure itvout another way. It's fine."

((Oops why did I not see this lol))

"I'll protect you." She hears guards coming. "See you soon." she says, putting up her hood and running away.

((it's fine!))

"See you!" He whispers and runs back to the floor of th cell.

Yadriel curls up near the back of the cell, cold and dirty

Rayonna stood guard outside the cell along with one other. Her eyes emotionless and her face blank. She stared straight ahead, not even acknowledging him.

Yadriel stays silent, knowing he did it again. He failed her, and deserved to die. At his trial, he said, "I'm guilty," because he can't possibly live with the thought of her hurt.

Her heart broke. And she didn't think it could ever be fixed. She covered up her emotions with a mask. An emotionless one. When she laughed, her laughs were fake, and so were her smiles. She didn't talk much, barely saying a few sentences. If anybody noticed, then they didn't comment on it. When she had found out that he was to be executed, she had locked herself in her room for a whole day.

A different guard cones and unlocks the cell. He doesn't look at Ray as he walks to the execution center. It wasn't public, as it would be too easy for his siblings to rescue him. His last wish mentally, is to kiss Ray one last time. But they ask, all he does is glance at her and shake his head unconvincing.

Her eyes had a broken quality to them. Something that was so unlike how they used to be. Now they're completely dead, while they once used to be full of life. They used to sparkle with excitement, get a certain mischievous look when she was plotting a prank but now all that was left was a shell of her older self.

Yadriel stands where the guards where supposed to shoot him. He wanted it to happen. He wouldn't live in a world where the woman he loved hated him.

((yup, real quick))

((We'll have to see....))

((Rayonna might not ever heal if he died.....😈😈😈))

She turned around and walked inside, unable to watch this. It hurt too much. She couldn't watch as they killed him. As they killed the guy she loved. The one she had tried to get over but hadn't managed to. The one who still had a place in her heart.

"Last chance. Is anyone willing to vouch for him?" the executioner smirked. Because who would? The guards? His missing siblings? No one.

Lin (I have no idea what's going on) wrote: ""Last chance. Is anyone willing to vouch for him?" the executioner smirked. Because who would? The guards? His missing siblings? No one."

ooooh... i see now... : ) YAY!!!))

(( :) ))

((could it be someone else who vouches for him?))

♛︎ℝ︎ℰ︎Ⓨ︎♛︎ wrote: "((could it be someone else who vouches for him?))"

*gasps in surprise* how could you?!?!))

((I want her to be shocked at the turn of events. I want her to not know about this opportunity.))

((yeah))

Monica sighs as he walks back in. She knew Ray, obviously, since as Captain of the Guard, it was Monica's job to know her soilders. "I will." No reaction. They just let him go.

Yadriel is beaten and scarred in his cell, wanting to die. He still didn't know that Ray loved him

She walked towards his cell, standing in front of it. It hurt her tremendously to see him like this, to not be able to help him when he is like this.

Yadriel looks up, his face blank. Another guard unlocks the door and raises his eyebrows