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message 1: by kyla (new)

kyla There u go have fun!!!


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh, I will.


message 3: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Yeah at last that took you long


message 4: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Us fairy godmothers have tight schedules you better quicken it up young lady


message 5: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments I’m sure you will


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

It's the year 1600, and technology is already past what it is in our time. There's creatures that roam the great wasteland.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

These creatures can use a type of magic called simply "Go-Go." (They're very simple minded and it's based around transportation.)


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

they use this power to make vehicles stop, go, and turn, making other vehicles crash into them. they are also hard to catch. they can just teleport away.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

ya know i'm glad no one's on here. nothing like typing somewhere trying to get inspiration with no interjections or add-ons... *holds back screaming out of boredom*


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

hiiiiii....... UwU


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

ya know why i like rps?


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

because you get multiple sets of imagination crashing together in a fiery explosion.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

They re fun


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

you can make extraordinary worlds and creations, and most importantly stories, out of pure thought.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

oooh!!! lin check your pms plz.


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

yay!!! thx.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Shout out to @Charlotte for this world building starter!!!

1. You live in a world where magic is muted when it rains
2. The world has been cursed, nothing can grown naturally, suddenly a small sprout appears outside you characters house
3. You live in a world where upon your birth you get a certain amount of magic


message 23: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Thank you thank you *blows kisses*


Elisabeth aka Elsie(Taylor's version) | 2092 comments Char you’re a genius. Well my idea wasn’t that bad too.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

A room, it appears to be in a hospital. there's a man, woman, and doctor. the woman is giving birth.

the baby is born and given to his mother.

"he's beautiful..." the woman says. she looks up at her husband. "would you like to hold him?"

the man nods and picks up the boy. he looks at the child, a tear slipping down his cheek.
if only i could speak to you, the man thinks.


message 26: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 25, 2021 08:59AM) (new)

he opens his mouth and mouths the words, thank you, to the doctor. he's a mute, his tongue cut out for using magic unlawfully.

suddenly, a bright light filled the room. the child was getting his magic...



message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

the doctor sighs and leans back in his chair. he remembered that day, 13 years ago, like it was yesterday. the bright light that flashed like a halo around the child... he had never seen that strong of magic embowed on anyone.


message 28: by kyla (new)

kyla Charlotte wrote: "Thank you thank you *blows kisses*"

Your welcome :)


message 29: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Okay


message 30: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments I’ve been reading your book for a while and I think it sounds interesting


message 31: by Charlotte (last edited Feb 25, 2021 09:17AM) (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments At your last comment I scrolled down and reloaded it just to see if there were any other


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

what do you think?


message 33: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Elisabeth wrote: "Char you’re a genius. Well my idea wasn’t that bad too."

Nope I liked it ;) and no not really


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

the doctor gets up and walks to the door.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

an explosion rocks the town.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

"damn it... chargers..." he opens the door.


message 37: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 27, 2021 02:10PM) (new)

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the man walks into town. he waves to a man. "excuse me sir!!! where are the chargers?" the man points to the sky. "thank you." who would kill someone, just to gain an enormous amount of magic?


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

the man walks to the chargers. he activates his magic, and being a level seven, flies up.


message 39: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 27, 2021 02:20PM) (new)

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MAGIC LEVELS QUICK REFERENCE:

0. Cannot go to most public gatherings, extremely weak, and can die 10x easier.
1. What it takes to live.
2. Can see who has a two or above.
3. Can see in the dark.
4. Can increase speed.
5. Can increase strength.
6. Can funnel energy into a punch/kick/touch and possibly kill people with a touch.
7. Can fly.
8. Can see through anything.
9. Can move objects with thought.
10. Can shapeshift themselves and other people/things.
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