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message 1: by A.L. (new)

A.L. Souza (auralyris) | 5 comments The Protectors: A teenage girl discovers she has superpowers after entering a new school and learning that she had been living a life sheltered from a dangerous secret about what she is capable of.

I'm currently writing chapter 4 and due to helpful discussions and reviews, chapters 1 and 2 are already different from what is uploaded to COURSERA, but I think it's readable still. Looking forward to some reviews!

Chapter 1: http://shorturl.at/jsDGV

Chapter 2: http://shorturl.at/psGM5

Chapter 3: http://shorturl.at/enuDI


message 2: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 619 comments Awesome, you got your own topic going. Just keep posting your chapters here. Don't feel bad if you don't see reviews posting up right away, everyone is working on their stuff and getting stuck in their own novels.

Drop in, here, let us know how your doing, keep active but don't let this pull you away from writing. If you get stuck let me know and I'll try to help you out as best as I can, if not, try to hit 10 chapters and I'll be happy to give you you're first peer review.


message 3: by Dilara (new)

Dilara Ucar | 8 comments Hi, A.L.

I would like to see the updated versions, could you send it to me via email:

ucarozgedilara@gmail.com

I'll write my reviews on your coursera links.


message 4: by A.L. (new)

A.L. Souza (auralyris) | 5 comments Andres wrote: "Awesome, you got your own topic going. Just keep posting your chapters here. Don't feel bad if you don't see reviews posting up right away, everyone is working on their stuff and getting stuck in t..."

Dilara and I have been working together and it's been great. Her story is super cool and she's been giving me precious insights. All thanks to this group.


message 5: by Dilara (new)

Dilara Ucar | 8 comments Thanks! I am happy to be working with you as well. Excited for your novel.


message 6: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 619 comments Awesome! I look forward to reading both of your stories. I'm just not good at multitasking stories so I only do one at a time or my brain gets mad at me.


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