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A.J's Poetic Nook
"I'm drenched from head to toe,don't know where to begin from…
My last breath,
My last heartbeat was all that I remember…
And infront I saw,
The Death himself walking past…
He came to me and whispered,
'Do u wanna live or die'?!
I said,
Take me, take me away,
This cruel world has left me nothing,
But darkness from night to day…"
It's not that great but the most recent one I wrote hope ya'll like it :)
I normally don't read poems so I don't have any critical sense about it, but for me is beautiful!! keep going, A.J ♡(not a native English speaker, sorry if I wrote something wrong)
ana wrote: "I normally don't read poems so I don't have any critical sense about it, but for me is beautiful!! keep going, A.J ♡(not a native English speaker, sorry if I wrote something wrong)"
Thankyou so much for appreciation :)
It’s great! It talks about death and how death is sometimes seen as an escape from the cruel world, right? Also just asking does this have a rhyming scheme?
Gourica wrote: "It’s great! It talks about death and how death is sometimes seen as an escape from the cruel world, right? Also just asking does this have a rhyming scheme?"
welll u made out the theory well and as per the rhyming scheme i always try to keep a rhyme at the end but sometimes when i imagine it as more of a verse rather than a para i give out more connections :)
This is actually very very great! I am writing a collection of poems as well and am going to publish it through KDP. you should definitely publish a compilation
Rafia wrote: "This is actually very very great! I am writing a collection of poems as well and am going to publish it through KDP. you should definitely publish a compilation"Thanx Rafia well I'm trying but its kinda hard xD but thanxx
"My heart is shattered into a thousand pieces,And im trying to pick them one by one.
My heart is no less than glass…
And when I try to pick it up,
I end up getting hurt..."
not exactly a poem but a few lines that came to my head this morning xD
Living In A World Full Of Lies"What's the problem with you?
Why you so cold to me?
Have you had enough of me?
Am I also gonna be like the others,
Dumped, forgotten and rotten huh?
You said that we're besties.
A match made in heaven.
"Sister love" yeah that's what you always said to hide your own mistakes.
Yet even after that,
I was completely blind to see,
How you were using me.
You didn't need me.
Just wanted my social circle.
You never wanted to be friends.
Just wanted some attention.
Now tell me,
Who gave you a shoulder to cry on?
Who listened to your never-ending rants huh?
Who was the one who gave up in the end just to let you win huh?
What's the problem with you girl?
Or should I say what was the deal with me.
For I couldn't see all the times your "simple no - offence jokes" were actually a wolf in disguise.
You just know how to break hearts and lie.
You said I can pour all my feelings to you,
And like a fool when I did you told them to every single person you knew.
And when I confronted,
You made a lame excuse.
And oh so stupid of me I said "Nevermind, I still love you"
Did you realize how much you lied to me?
Did you realize how much I loved you?
You stole every person I cared of.
And now thanks to you I'm all alone so plz just shutup and get lost."
Gourica wrote: "Hehe nice!!!!!!!"relatable?
Of course it is!!! Although is it a poem? Ir a song?
Gourica wrote: "Of course it is!!! Although is it a poem? Ir a song?"
uhh more like a rap xD just need to compose n produce it now lmao
Jennifer wrote: "Your poems are so good!!"Thankyou so much Jennifer! I'm so glad you like them
hey A.j ive got the best producer and composer in my contacts. shoulf i give you his number? His name is Min Yoongi.....LMAO
Rafia wrote: "hey A.j ive got the best producer and composer in my contacts. shoulf i give you his number? His name is Min Yoongi.....LMAO"bruh JUST FRIKIN GIVE ME HIS CONTACTS :/ xD lmao
sharmaine ♥︎ wrote: "omg i loveee it!!! and i can actually imagine it as a rap!! :)"thankyou!!!! <333333
Hidden SecretsI've been thinking about us,
For a long time now..
I'm tired of waiting for you to show up,
Everyday,
I'm running through a maze
In my heart,
I'm tryna' find the person,
Whose invaded my thoughts.
Started loving the darkness,
My eyes hurts with all those lights now.
I feel like home,
When I'm in the dark
But the day just makes me a bit more insecure..
Woo-
I've become like a monster now,
Started hating mankind-
I've become like a monster now,
Can't control all that's been hidden inside..
So many secrets,
I've been hiding within me,
Scared to face that all-
Every now and then I think,
"Would everyone love me the same way they do now..
After knowing what's all that,
That has possessed me..?"
Yeah several, thousand thoughts running around in my head.
The pain's so severe,
I can't take it.
People say I'm strong,
But inside, I know that I'm too scared to face this world..
I wanna disappear..
In the clouds above, or the grounds below.
I wanna disappear..
Never to be seen again.
It's the latest song I wrote and.. I guess I've kinda composed it aswell lmfao xD anyways Hope y'all like it!
A.J. wrote: "Hidden SecretsI've been thinking about us,
For a long time now..
I'm tired of waiting for you to show up,
Everyday,
I'm running through a maze
In my heart,
I'm tryna' find the person,
Whose invad..."
WOW!!!!!!!! TBH, I love the words here, it is so appealing. & I also find that it hits different when sung in a rhythmic way and sung in a poetic way.
Thank you Skakshi! I'm so glad you liked it :)
*applause* *calls bighit* Ahem is this Bang Pd? Yes well I think you lost your composer......Yeah? Oh well shes right here I will send her back to South Korea........GIRL THIS WAS GREAT!
OMG- XDDD Ahh thank you thank you Rafia!! xDD yess please bighit hire meeeeee!!! i swear i wont drool over ur artistes ((or mayb)) but pleaseee T-T lmfaoo xDDD💜💜💜💜💜
Gourica wrote: "Its great A.J! @rafia lol true xD"
Thank you Gourica!!
Well I saw a movie-Lucy (2014) and though of writing a review :D
It's quite big so take ur time to read xD
LUCY
Released- July 25, 2014
Starring- Scarlett Johansson
Morgan Freeman
Choi Min-Sik
Amr Waked
Director- Luc Besson
Genre- Sci-fi, Action, Thriller
Time- 90 minutes
My Rating- ☆☆☆☆
Trigger Warning- Drug usage, sexual content, foul language
Summary-
**Warning : Text may contain major spoilers**
The movie starts with Richard, Lucy's (Scarlett Johansson) boyfriend forcing Lucy to deliver a briefcase that had some important paperwork to Mr. Jang (Choi Min-Sik), a korean, underground drug dealer, staying in a 5-star hotel.
Little did Lucy know, that the briefcase had no paperwork, but instead had packets of a newly made synthetic drug, CPH4 aka carboxytetrahydropterin synthase.
Reaching the hotel, she found herself abducted by thugs who soon turn her into a drug mule. Shortly after, Lucy is surgically implanted with a package containing CPH4 in her intestine.
Along with Lucy, three more people, from Paris, Berlin and Rome respectively are also implanted with this drug.
After being given tickets to return to their own countries, Lucy founds herself locked in a cellar with two men who try to manipulate her.
After being brutally kicked in her abdomen, the pouch containing the drug starts to leak causing it to mix with her cells, expanding her cellular capacity.
With her brain at a percentage of 28%, Lucy gets gifted by many supernatural powers such as telepathy and telekinesis which help her to get out of the cellar and have remove the pouch from her intestine.
Soon, she ends up at her friend, Christine's house where Lucy seeks out a neurologist, Professor Samuel Norman (Morgan Freeman)
Before giving Prof. Norman a visit, Lucy decides to gather the other drug pouches from the three men. Taking help from a cop, Captain Pierre Del Rio (Amr Waked) she seizes the other three pouches aswell.
But the trouble isn't finished yet.
Mr. Jang along with his team, resolves to kill Lucy and take the other pouches aswell.
Till the time Mr. Jang reached the University where Lucy was being examined by Prof. Norman and his colleagues, Del Rio had already set up a security with the help of Lucy who had already predicted Mr. Jang's plan.
Taking the other three pouches, the professors injected the solution in Lucy's body to help her achieve 100% of her cellular capacity.
As she turned from 70--80--90%, Lucy started forming a new generation computer, in which she would store all the knowledge, she was gaining with the increase in her cellular capacity.
Reaching 99%, Mr. Jang finally finding Lucy, prepares to shoot her.
But, the twist comes where Lucy reaches her 100% after which she disappears from her dress and into the computer she had formed.
From the computer, Lucy held out a USB, giving it to Prof. Norman in which she had stored all the knowledge which was still intact with the humans.
With the movie ending, we hear Lucy's voice saying-
"Time is the only true unit of measure. It gives proof to the existence of matter. Without time, we don't exist"
My Review-
An intruiging film.
Can be watched by children above the age of 11.
I personally found 'Lucy' to be an extremely entertaining and informative film. Though, some parts actually went a bit above my head mostly because of the high level science present in it which kind of took me, a bit to process the happening in the film.
The message conveyed was that humans never really die.
The concept of achieving nirvana after being aware that she no longer need her physical body and that she is now a part of that singular reality i.e. the concept of Vishishtadvaitam is fairly explained.
Before starting, I'd like everyone to be mentally prepared as this one is a pretty heavy movie dealing with life and death, time and the existence of the animals (including humans)
A few quotes that I personally found to be of immense use -
• "Humans are concerned with more than having, than living" - Prof. Norman
• "Ignorance brings chaos, not knowledge" - Lucy
• "Learning is always a painful process" - Lucy
A must watch movie.
Definitely and most certainly recommended.
Thank You.
Nice work on your review A.J.You keep on writing! Support all the way to you!
❤❤❤
LiteraryCritics wrote: "Nice work on your review A.J.You keep on writing! Support all the way to you!
❤❤❤"
Thank You!! 🤗💜
ThoughtsMy mind often wonders,
To some of the most wierd questions I fail to interprate.
TMI,
I usually think about these topics at the most random time at night.
Looking up at the ceiling,
My mind starts to wander in a different world.
A dozen questions or so,
That usually go unanswered.
Next morning I wake up and find myself thinking about the previous night.
And as always I forget the questions I had made up in my mind.
These thoughts so wild, and a bit controversial,
Occur either when I'm about to sleep,
Or in the shower singing 'Someone You Loved'
These thoughts come to me,
Like the lyrics of a song.
I guess, even Taylor Swift would have had a number of thoughts like mine,
To create a masterpiece like 'Cardigan'
Sitting on a bench, taking in the view,
And suddenly a question pops up to me,
'Hey, how would vanilla ice-cream taste with green tea?'
There goes my poor mind, thinking of all the wierd combinations.
I now get it why people call me a 'blabbering alien'.
But hey,
It isn't my fault that my imagination's so wild.
Even you can give it a try.
Not everyone has the ability to think the way I do,
And guess what?
I finished this poem in just a minute or two!
I guess, this is one of my rare poems that actually have humour xDD
You finished the poem in just a minute or two? That's talent!
A.J. wrote: "ThoughtsMy mind often wonders,
To some of the most wierd questions I fail to interprate.
TMI,
I usually think about these topics at the most random time at night.
Looking up at the ceiling,
M..."
Totally relatable. Even I get such thoughts every single minute. So probably you aren't alone in the world of aliens. 💕💕💕
Nice work Ash! 👏👏👏
@LiteraryCritics haha xDD ALIEN ARMY ARISE!!! XDD thank you!! <333 💜💜@Syesha.. yeah xDD thanxx and yes stan me aka stan talent 😌 XDDD jkjkjkjkjkk
Even I also thinks some really weird things..... but I can,t convert it into such a beautiful poem like this. A.J. you are really wonderful poet.
@Shakshi ah thank you!! well, if you close your eyes nd imagine it, the words would automatically form some poems and you just gotta pen them down!
A.J, I think its your best! Like its AWESOME.
Gourica wrote: "A.J, I think its your best! Like its AWESOME."THANK YOU!! <333
A.J. wrote: "@LiteraryCritics haha xDD ALIEN ARMY ARISE!!! XDD thank you!! <333 💜💜@Syesha.. yeah xDD thanxx and yes stan me aka stan talent 😌 XDDD jkjkjkjkjkk"
yes yes--i stan you for your talent and big fat ego xD jkjk xDD
My Five SistersI've got many personalities,
They all come out when the clock strucks 3:00
All of them, one by one
Tell me about how their day had begun.
The sweet and cheerful had a glorious morning.
Waking up early, and sipping hot tea,
Along with humming a sweet melody
Screaming along to the lyrics of 'Dynamite'
'Annabelle' and 'The Conjuring' completed her day with a movie night.
The short-tempered was groaning with a frown.
Eyebrows burried,
She started to moan.
Waking up early wasn't her thing.
And it took her a while to end her complaining.
With a grimace did she do all her chores,
Somehow, her day wasn't that fabulous.
The social butterfly went out to play.
Laughing, goofing and screaming all day.
She came back with fire in her eyes.
Basically, she knew how to live her life.
The introverted wierdo was on her laptop the whole day.
Going through instagram,
Simping over Selena Gomez.
Tea in one hand and a diary in another,
Not a day went by when she didn't get scolded by her mother.
The bored one,
had nothing to share.
Just munching on snacks and listening to music,
Is exactly how she starts her day.
A dominating and arrogant one, and a lazy soul for sure,
She did nothing but DM her friends not taking her hands off her phone.
Five of my personalities,
Having five different feelings.
That makes a day of a teenager,
A bit more confusing.
All of them see the situations in a different way,
For some,
Football maybe be boring but for another it could be a way to call it a day.
Socializing may seem interesting to one,
But the other may want to just sit in a corner and sulk.
All of this, creates a lot of issues,
At times even I'm not able to decide,
What I actually have to do..
But I don't mind
And I'm proud to say,
That these five are the ones that make me who I am,
A bit of an introverted philosopher with a pinch of goodness and mischief.
I don't really like it much but.. my mom and teachers liked it so thought of sharing ^.^
I frequently write short poems/songs and would be happy enough to share them with ya'll!
Plz do give your honest review aswell!!
Love 💜