Nolyn: Book 1 of the Rise and Fall Trilogy discussion
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Oh Sephryn... What have you done? When your heart is so good and all you've ever wanted is to protect others, to be used in such a way is so supremely evil!
I really hoped that she would get back on track instead of further playing such a helpless toy in that cruel game :-(At this point of the story I’m really missing a strong female with less naivety and self-pity. At some points of the chapter I just wanted to literally shake her....yes, you could still have your shoes, if you hadn’t been that naive, yes you’re right, you brought yourself into this, by keeping a secret no women ever should...But overall I have to admit it’s quite a masterpiece to raise such intense emotions with a written character.
Also great storytelling what’s going on in the mind of the emperor! I’ve got the feeling I learned more about his character in the last chapters than in the whole Legends. See him different now in a positive way and would have wished him to have his son on his side.

