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message 1: by chloe ; a ghost, i can't stand unpunctual alien attacks. (new)

chloe ; a ghost (chloedoewy) | 1031 comments Mod
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<.b>Name:

<.b>Opinions on the Group:
<.b>Recommendation from another Group Member*:
<.b>Average Activity: (how many times per week do you come on?)

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<.b>Arena Idea: (share what you would put as the first post (edits can be made if you are chosen!); include:
- description of the arena (obviously!)
- the contents of the Cornucopia
- tribute outfits
- setting (of course!)
- Gamemaker twists (i.e. poisoning water supply, hiding the Cornucopia, etc.))

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<.b>Confusion: (how would you deal with a confused roleplayer?)
<.b>Power Play: (how would you deal with a power player?)
<.b>Updating: (how responsible would you be with updates (Cornucopia contents/sponsors)
<.b>Criticism: (how would you deal with criticism?)
<.b>Infringement: (how would you deal with people breaking the rules)

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<.b>Title: (if you win, you’ll be made a temporary moderator: what will your title be?)
<.b>Favorite Color:
<.b>Favorite District:
<.b>Favorite Tribute from Past Arenas:

*This one is the sort of thing where if you can’t get it, I understand. Ask around on chat though.


message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 22, 2015 12:51PM) (new)






❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙ [general] ❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙


Name: Julane

Opinions on the Group: This is an amazing group, I love how great everyone is at roleplaying, and how the group is getting better as it goes!

Recommendation from another Group Member: Aubree has given me a recommendation to be Gamemaker. Chloe, she said she would send you a message, I'm sure she did. :) here's what she said to me:

Aubree wrote:
"Your good, I totally don't mind. Do I need to write a recommendation for you? Or just tell Chloe that I believe you'd make a great game maker? It doesn't offend me at all, in fact, it makes me smile because it means that this group is gonna 
be even better. :)"


Average Activity: I'd say at least once a day, usually more, but on school days, after 3:00 mountain time. I for sure read all updates, and I try to respond every time, but I read all. I can't assure that for every single day, once in a while I go on trips, or I have too much homework, or my siblings need the computer for homework, but I have other ways to check GR, and it would be very rare that I wouldn't check on a day.



❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙ [arena] ❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙
After a long goodbye to your mentor and escort, and a curt nod to your district partner, you are whisked into a hovercraft, and then to the catacombs of an Arena. You sip some water, and try to control the flushes of adrenaline. Your stylist helps you dress in your outfit: undergarments, a district color tank top, soft cream colored shirt, black pants, white socks, black combat boots with silver laces, good for running too, a white jacket accented with your districts complementary color, and, to your surprise, a stretchy paracord bracelet around your wrist with a compass on it. The defining piece, though, is a white rope necklace around your throat. When unraveled, you will find that the rope is the perfect length for a noose...

Outfit displayed for District 4

(view spoiler)

You say one last goodbye, and rise up into the air.

The arena doesn’t seem to bad. The sky is bright blue with fluffy white clouds, and the grass is green. On one side is a leafy forest, another a hilly field of tall grasses, and last a meadow with a stream running through it. The 24 tributes surround the Cornucopia, which is a tree. Scattered around the tall, leafy tree are flashlights, lots of rope, varied weapons, some backpacks, torches, flares, etc. The air feels chilly with a breeze, and you understand the warm layers of your tribute outfit now. A shudder runs through your body when you realize that hanging from the trees branches are two nooses.

The Arena is made up of two rings; an inner one and an outer one. The inner has the biomes listed above, but is tiny. Mostly just to trick the tributes. The outer ring is completely maze. Huge, dark mazes, where mutts lurk around every corner. Choose to stay in the center of the Arena, and risk easy confrontation, as well as mutts that mess with your mind. These include Tracker Jackers, Jabberjays, lizards that look half reptile, half like someone you love, and voices that sing every night. And, to top it all off, right, in the very center of the inner ring, is a hanging tree, which is where all of the supplies are surrounding. This seems to be why there is such an excessive amount of rope in the Cornucopia supplies. Go to the outer maze, and find yourself easily get lost, darkness, and predators, but weapons hidden in different spots. The Arena is freezing at night, and cold in the day.

Gamemaker Twists:
There will be several things to keep things exciting. I won't go into to much detail, for fear of spoilers, but here are some:
↳Feasts
↳Mutt attacks
↳Freak nature patterns (sudden storm, fire, etc.)

(view spoiler)

(view spoiler)

IF NEEDED, I CAN MAKE A MORE NORMAL ARENA, I DON'T MIND





❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙ [management] ❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙
Confusion: I would ask them what exactly they are confused about. Then, if I understand, and/or know the answer, I would do my best to explain it. If I didn't, I would explain what I do know, and tell them that I would ask my fellow Gamemaker for advice.

Power Play: I would gently tell them if I thought they were power playing. Usually, people don't even realize what they are doing. I would just say, "_______, I think that it probably isn't realistic if __________ does ___________. It's fine, of course, if they _________ instead." So basically, I would give them an idea of how to change it. If it continued, I would remind the, again, and if they STILL did it, I would probably make bolded announcements like "Please disregard ___________ that _______ posted." And always, (I mean ALWAYS) end it with a smiley face. :)

Updating: I come on to this group at least once a day, usually three or four times, so I would make sure to update what needed to be updated most likely once a day, sometimes more, if necessary.

Criticism: I love advise, and help. I would gladly accept help and advise/ constructive criticism on the help page, and the Roleplay improving page, as well as advise/tips on how to be a better Gamemaker/tribute. I would also love help from my fellow Gamemaker. I would also allow others to give other people advise, AS LONG AS IT IS CONSTRUCTIVE and AS LONG AS THE OTHER PERSON WANTS IT. If it is JUST plain mean, I will not allow it, as with if the person doesn't want it. If the person is breaking either of these rules, I would probably say, "______, I don't know if you realize that what you are saying can be a bit hurtful. Please discontinue this behavior, or you will be banned for several day and/or your comments will be deleted. I don't know if you were intentionally trying to hurt _________. Just don't do it again." Again, if this was their first warning, or they didn't mean to be rude, I'd probably add a smiley face. :)

Infringement: If someone broke the rules for the first time, I would probably tell them, saying, “_________, you broke Rule #_. Please edit out ______ in your comment. Thank you.” If they refused to edit their comment/did it again (if purposely), I would warn them again, and tell they may not post roleplaying on the group for 2 days. If, after the 2 days, this continued, I would talk to Chloe about it, and, if we agree it necessary, I would ban them from the group for a few days at a time. This would continue as they continue, and would get progressively longer. After 3 of these, the member in question would be banned from the group completely. The amount of warnings before a permanent differ depending the severity of the broken rule.


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Title: Julane: If you put enough pressure on coal, it turns to pearls!

Favorite Color: All colors. Any colors. It sorta depends. :3

Favorite District: Probably 4. Maybe 1 or 2. I have to say, I like Careers, but I'll make the most of anything I can get. I like all the districts for their own reasons, but I like having a Career too.

Favorite Tribute from Past Arenas: Maybe Linadel or Cia, they were both tough as nails, and Lina was just hilarious and amazing. I also like Minny's twist at the end of Arena 1.
Also, for the brief period of time he was present, Lence was hilarious.

And if Arena 2 charries are included, I absolutely love Hazel and Lake as a team!!!




message 3: by Mel (new)

Mel (melsheard) ❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙ [general]❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙
Name:
Mel

Opinions on the Group: Fabolus! Very fun!
Recommendation from another Group Member*: (idk?)
Average Activity: Once every day, if I can help it!

❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙ [arena]❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙
Arena Idea:

- description of the arena The whole Arena is water. Nothing else, nothing more. The tributes rise up from their metal plate to see water surrounding them and suddenly, their knees are in water, then their stomach, then their shoulders.. The gong has sounded and they start to swim. But swim to where? In the far distance, a tall structure can be seen. It might be a bloodbath, but it's the only place with dry land. Apart from the massive tree in the middle. From its roots, the tree is completely dry and there is no water surrounding it. As soon as the tributes touch this tree, they are instantly dried. Unfortunately, only one tribute on the tree at a time. They will know if a tribute is already up the tree, as they will stay sodden when they touch it. If the person in the tree dies/is killed, then the next tribute may have safety from it. The tree is ten metres or so high, and the top cannot be seen.
- the contents of the Cornucopia Water, a loaf of bread and wire.
- tribute outfits (view spoiler)
- setting (of course!) -Already said-
- Gamemaker twists (i.e. poisoning water supply, hiding the Cornucopia, etc.)) An electric current running through the water every two hours. Either it's up the tree, swimming to the mountains or a water-proof blanket to stay alive.

❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙ [management]❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙❙
Confusion: (how would you deal with a confused roleplayer?)
I'd ask them what they were confused with and explain in as much detail as I can. If they were still confused, I'd be okay for them to message me.
Power Play: (how would you deal with a power player?) Tell them what they were doing and ask them to stop. If it still continued, message them and ask them to stop again. If it carried on, ban them from the Arena for a day or two. It's unfair on other people.
Updating: (how responsible would you be with updates (Cornucopia contents/sponsors) Responsible! I'm on it every day/other day aha xD
Criticism: (how would you deal with criticism?) Depending on what it was, if it was towards my writing, I'd take it on board. If it was something not-nice, I'd tell the person that said it that it's not acceptable to behave like that and ask them to stop.
Infringement: (how would you deal with people breaking the rules) The same as power-playing. Tell them to stop. If they didn't, tell the head-mod and ask what they wanted to do with the person.

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Title: (if you win, you’ll be made a temporary moderator: what will your title be?)
*fancy trident emoji* We just saw Finnick Odair in his underwear *fancy trident emoji*
Favorite Color: Blueeeee
Favorite District: Four. Finnick Odair is bae ♥
Favorite Tribute from Past Arenas: Books/films: FINNICK YUSS
Arena 1: Mihr Swanson, District 4 (no coincidence!)


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