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Self explanatory, I'll start:

It was a bright and sunny day, but sometimes the weather doesn't predict the moments that will change you...


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she was walking in the shade...


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alone, trapped from the sunlight.
....


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the screams were all she heard, yet the sun seemed to shine brighter, however not on her....


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, but on other people. why, she thought, can't the sun just shine on me? ...


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But the sun doesn't shine on invisble, nearly dying or dead people....


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...and she was invisible to all. unseen, unloved, worthless. gone, just gone...


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So why was she still here?....


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...she couldn't leave. she wanted to get out of this hell so bad, but she couldn't. she was stuck here forever...


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and then he came, the person who made her existence this way...


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..."shit," she muttered under her breath at the sight of him. she tried to run, but he had her tied to him. she truly could not go anywhere...


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"You can't hide from me Love" he chuckles, his accent sounding slightly british


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"i...i can't..." she stammered over her words. why was she charmed by his voice?...


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he chuckles, "You should just surrender"


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"never," she whispered, her lips hardly moving. she could barely talk.
"what was that?" he was suddenly right behind her, his lips against her ear...


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"Never"


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her voice broke. "never," she said for a third time, trying ever so desperately to get her voice heard...


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His tounge touched her ear, "I don't want to hurt you, in fact, I want you with me"


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she tried to squirm away. away from him, away from his nasty tongue, away from his taste. but he put his hands around her waist. hard. "where do you think you're going, love?"


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"Away from you" she spits out


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"oh darling, don't be so naive." a grin spreads across his face. "you are going no where."


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She tried to speak, but her voice failed her. “Mmph. Mmmphh.” “Shhh” His voice was soothing and soft. She struggled but his voice was like a lullaby slowly putting her to sleep………


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Unwillingly, or somewhat willing, her eyes fluttered shut...


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“mine. you are mine.” he whispered into her ear…


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Nightmares came to her. The screaming. The man. Her struggling. His voice. His voice. It replayed in her head over and over again. Then, she awoke….


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..."where the hell am i?" she looked around, surrounded by darkness.
he stepped out into the shadows"the sunlight will never reach you, darling. you are invisible, remember?" ...


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She tried to speak, but it was like her lips were sewn together. Remember? Re- member. Remember. Remember what? She couldn’t remember anything. Or speak for that matter. Her head was throbbing, and her memory was fuzzy. How did she get here again? Then he spoke; “ Don’t worry darling I will keep you safe for as long as I can.” “Keep me SAFE??” She suddenly found her voice. “You cursed me, and now you want to keep me SAFE??”


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she was back. her voice was back, her life was back, her soul was back. "you, you bastard. keep me safe from what? if i need to be safe from anything, it's you. YOU are the reason i'm here. now get the hell away from me."
"darling, my love, i need to protect you. you are mine, i am yours, we are one. have you not realized that by now?"


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She laughed, "You're delusional"


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a slow smirk spread across his face. "you're the delusional one, my sweet."


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"Stop, stop calling me that"


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That smile. As soon as she met his eyes, all her most traumatizing experiences came back to her, all at once “WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME?????” She screamed, tears running down her cheeks. “Please, I beg you. Let me rest.”


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He smiled, "No, My love, you can't rest without me"


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She shuddered violently


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Then, she blacked out. She was sent into a spiral of darkness. When she finally awoke, she was on a cold, wet caver floor darker then she was just in. “No,” she muttered, “please, no.” She sobbed, for she realized that she could never escape her curse. She would stay here forever, never able to die. Never able to rest. She screamed and yelled and threw herself against the walls so hard she was soon covered in blood. “WHY??” She dropped to the floor and laid there, knowing this was now her prison. And there she stayed for all of eternity.


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And all she heard was silence and all she felt was a tingle on her mouth


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she would never see the sunlight. she belonged to him, truly and fully. there was no getting out of this.


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she was lifeless, a doll and a puppet


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gone. forever gone.


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i feel like the story's finished but idk
do you guys wanna do another one?


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yes,


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yes,


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okay
can i start it?


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Yeah, that would be fun


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yep


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okkk


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darkness. it consumes you, it eats you from the outside in, it's all you ever see.


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This is the story of poor Lucy who was very unfortunate, and experienced the warth of the darkness the hard way.


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Lucy has been a quite girl, a girl who knew too much, saw too much, heard too much


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they eat lucy up, they feed into her mind. she's screeching, yelling to the world, but no one seems to understand her


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