Poetry Point discussion

love is in the air
i cant help but glare
look at that couple over there
someone kill me

~a poem i wrote in 4th grade about valentine's day

Swallow I love it

thank you aston mcasterson
it didnt even rhyme smh

it doesn't have too

air glare there???

well yeah but the last line
it's inconsistent is what i mean

yes i know datttt, i'm trying to say it rhymed for the most part except for the last line so its inconsistent

Naji (Mcnajerson) wrote: "Miss MAM*** it’s my phones fault sowwi"

if its ur phone's fault why r u saying sowwi

what do yall tink of this:

love is in the air
i cant help but glare
look at that couple over there
its just not fair
why don't i give them a good scare
i'll shave off all their hair
alright i gotta prepare
should i cause them such despair?
maybe they should fill out a questionnaire
oh look! a bear!

i actually wike it
mary and naji and aston dont stand a chance

THESE ARE SO FUN AHHHH

poems.... hmmm i have one :)

i did love you
once upon a time.
then you hurt me
you told me i was a crime.
i wanted to sob
and wanted to forgive.
but ive let you go love,
so that i can finally live

@macky mcmackerson yeeeesh thats so good! and im swara lol

guys these are good!
I only have one "love poem" and I wrote it for hope

did u see mine -_-

yes I did

shawarma~dont regret it one bit bc he had it comin wrote: "what do yall tink of this:

love is in the air
i cant help but glare
look at that couple over there
its just not fair
why don't i give them a good scare
i'll shave off all their hair
alright i gott..."

shave off their hair!

Poem of the Day:
"One bottle of, him"
I found this guy, beautiful and sweet
One motion and he'll sweep me off my feet
One place we go, it's special to me
I always say ''He's the one I need"
His touch, his smile
Hard to say I'll be gone for a while
Out in the forest, far, far away
Is where I'll think of what to say
I shall say that I'm in love
and that his presence is an addicting drug

iz ok!! i put "shawarma" as a joke lol

my best one yet:

i awoke at dawn
as my sheep wanted to be drawn
his name was shawn
he loved to eat prawns
though he was always a bit withdrawn
he always wanted to go to babylon
he lounged around on our lawn
when we played chess he always moved his pawn
he had no brains but a lot of braun
one time he ate a swan
he loved to yawn
his poems were always spot-on
his partner was named amaron
he made him couvillion
but now he is unfortunately gone
shawn is now embrawn
he spends his time with an espadon
he makes crafts hands-on
there are many things shawn has undergone

ngl edgar allen poe is quaking in his grave after this one^^

i have one too but im not sure how i feel about it


he was the sun, i was the moon

he burnt for me, i shined with him

he was warm and soft, i was cold and sharp in the night sky

he was my yellow, my anchor

and when he stopped burning for me i disappeared from the sky that was full of reminders of him

suddenly all the stars i found happiness in became bitter without his touch

my heart swelled then deflated, in a good way, its really good :)

ahhh thank you so much i was nervous cos i never really shared a poem before

that teenage rage
it’s unmatched
so volatile and rushed
not premeditated
it doesn’t even know the meaning of the word
it just knows that it wants someone to listen
so desperately
wants someone to listen
and the only way to do that is to shout
shout at the ones it wants to hear it the most
to demand attention
the tantrum makes them salute
the tears say hold it steady
the resolve commands at ease
the recipients can rest now
the carriers will not

that teenage rage
if not released
will foster resentfulness
and teach it the ways of the vile
it will grow until it is no longer healthy
it will feed until it is obese and can no longer walk
yet it has the strength enough to shout
and it will
shout at the ones it wants to hear it the most
to demand attention
the violence makes them salute
the fear says hold it steady
the consequence commands at ease
the safe can rest now
the dangerous will not

holy moly naji mcnajerson das so good :oooo
i did not wike atbk that much but iz so saddd

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "I’m in love with a ghost
The memory of us.
When you told me you were sick,
I felt my heart combust.

How could I possibly go on,
Without my other half.
And only see your smile
In a framed photograp..."

Beautiful!!

Nia wrote: "that teenage rage
it’s unmatched
so volatile and rushed
not premeditated
it doesn’t even know the meaning of the word
it just knows that it wants someone to listen
so desperately
wants someone to..."

Love it!

Title: The Golden Bird
Style: Free Verse

Poem:
A man caged a bird
With feathers that of gold
He'd stroke her head with a soft heart
Fed and taken care of,
The bird was the happiest of all,
Before the day of doom
The times shone like gold

One day when she saw her friend
Chirping from bark to bark
Swirling in and out
Once for bad all it is
Envy surfaces
She steps out of the little cage
And takes her biggest flight

Liberalized with a smile
Her heart takes gasp of freedom
As she turns and swirls and dives
Down the river, up the hill
It's the day she shines
Her golden bright

No time it took the evil eyes to fall.
The man who had kept her like precious,
Carefully takes up his gun,
Surprised to see another magic creature.
Sounds of bullet echo,
Remarking that day of blood,
When the one that loves you the most,
Is the one that hurts you the most.

- Keya

ThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyou

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "“Apprehension coursing through my veins,
Nerves shackling my body like chains,
Xanax I need you to get through the day,
Insomnia why can you just go away,
Everyone thinks I’m doing fine
That’s a l..."

but have you seen mine about the old man?

one day an old man sat in his chair
actually there was not a chair
his wife had divorced him, fair and square
she won all of their possessions, including the old man's hair
the old man wanted to glare
and his ex-wife and her new boyfriend Pierre
he wondered if Pierre had a second to spare
for the old man wanted to give him a few dozen pears*
what if Pierre sold the pears?
then he would be a millionaire!
the old man sighed and started to play solitaire
he thought Pierre was as dumb as Cadence Sinclair
he wanted Pierre to wear
that monkey suit over there
but alas, the old man had lost custody of his air
he was dead by that point, i'm sorry to share


*for context, pears are a bad omen in taiwanese culture

shawarma~dont regret it one bit bc he had it comin wrote: "love is in the air
i cant help but glare
look at that couple over there
someone kill me

~a poem i wrote in 4th grade about valentine's day"

haha, I love this!!! It seems I feel the same way as 4th grade you felt every time valentine comes around

fi fi ʚ♡ɞ .°₊ wrote: "poems.... hmmm i have one :)

i did love you
once upon a time.
then you hurt me
you told me i was a crime.
i wanted to sob
and wanted to forgive.
but ive let you go love,
so that i can finally live"

this is good!!!! especially love the fact that it ends with you letting them go and living again :)

Strawberryboy wrote: "i see we are doing love poems, and I love fi fi's and shwarma's so I think I would like to join in :)

I kiss the moon and taste stars on his tongue
Still I whisper him secrets as he speaks of the ..."

Why does this put me in my feels? so bitter-sweet I can't help but love it!!!

aston mcasterson!!!(Semi Hiatus) wrote: "Poem of the Day:
"One bottle of, him"
I found this guy, beautiful and sweet
One motion and he'll sweep me off my feet
One place we go, it's special to me
I always say ''He's the one I need"
His tou..."

This is such a sweet one!!!!

I have a really old one probably among the first ones I ever wrote, hope you guys like it :)

She was a queen in your little world,
A daydream you always had,
She would let you in if you promised not to laugh.
And as you played into her fantasy,
You experienced such peace,
That you came back each time to try and be her king.
With each day you held her,
She whispered into your ear,
Of kingdoms you could capture to ensure you were always near
But for you it was a joke you never meant to hold on to,
So when you broke your crown you forgot,
Of the peace it brought you.
She cried as you left, but strong she grew,
Till her cries turned into laughs so evil and unknown.
When you one day passed by, you could barely see inside,
The darkness that prevailed, could help monsters hide,
And as you walked in to save the "trapped queen",
You found a new lady, waiting where she had been.
She questioned your intentions and laughed at your dreams,
Telling you you left her and all would be well at last,
After she took over your real world and ruled it like it needs,
So you stumbled out and burnt her house till only ashes could be seen,
Forgetting that this whole time, she was always just within,
So when you slept that night her laugh sounded in your ear,
And you realised you took her with you, just like you always feared,
And now you fight the voices that are always in your head,
Of a queen you sent to madness over play pretend.
- Bella

Y'ALL ARE SO TALENTED STOP HGFRDRFTGYHUJ
i love all of the poems <33

alsoooo i see we were sharing love poems
i have...... a lot of love poems
oopsies

mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "Y'ALL ARE SO TALENTED STOP HGFRDRFTGYHUJ
i love all of the poems <33

alsoooo i see we were sharing love poems
i have...... a lot of love poems
oopsies"

yesh she doesss

wannabe inej ghafa wrote: "mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "Y'ALL ARE SO TALENTED STOP HGFRDRFTGYHUJ
i love all of the poems <33

alsoooo i see we were sharing love poems
i have...... a lot of love p..."

lmzo it’s a problem

anyways
here’s some of them

“my heart belongs to you”

my heart belongs to you,
and all the things you make me do.
my heart belongs to your kisses in the rain,
that take away the pain.
my heart belongs to your arms as they hold me tight,
all through the night.
my heart belongs to our deep talks,
tying my heart in knots.
my heart belongs to your smile,
never leaving me in denial.

throughout all the years,
of so many tears.
so many emotions,
such a commotion.
wanting to savor all the days,
where things were okay.

no matter what happens,
no matter what changes,
my heart will always belong to you,
and all the things you make me do.
your kisses in the rain,
that take away the pain.
your arms as they hold me tight,
all through the night.
our deep talks,
tying my heart in knots.
your smile,
never leaving me in denial.

the real question is,
does your heart belong to me,
for all of eternity?

mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "anyways
here’s some of them

“my heart belongs to you”

my heart belongs to you,
and all the things you make me do.
my heart belongs to your kisses in the rain,
that take away the pain.
my heart b..."

holy frickity frack

“To Love The Way That I Do”
To love,
to hate.
Too little,
too late.
To love,
to die.
To loose,
to lie.

Our broken promises,
how they tear me apart.
Our broken promises,
how the rip at my heart.
Our broken love,
how it will never become.

To love,
the way that I do.
To hate,
it'll never be too little,
too late.
To love,
until I die.
To loose,
I could never lie,
to you;
not when i love you,
the way that I do.

Our broken promises,
we need to forget the past.
Our broken promises,
the rip in my heart will not last.
Our broken love,
will not be destroyed forever,
there's so much more we can discover.

“midnight wishes”

laying in bed,
late at night.
trying to clear my head,
only wishing i could hold you tight.

my midnight wishes,
your stolen kisses.
imagine if my wishes came true?
imagine if you loved me too?

late night drives,
holding your hand down the interstate,
where i feel ever so safe.

my midnight wishes,
your stolen kisses.
i need you to love me too.
is that something you can do?

feeling your kiss,
along my lips.
feeling your fingers,
graze my hips.

you can't love me too,
i know that's something you can't do.
i'm just creating this perfect reality,
filled with my midnight wishes,
your stolen kisses,
pretty lies,
and secret ties.

wannabe inej ghafa wrote: "mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "anyways
here’s some of them

“my heart belongs to you”

my heart belongs to you,
and all the things you make me do.
my heart belongs to yo..."

ehehehe thanketh

"all the things i'll never say"

staying up so late,
waiting for your text.
will it come in next?
staying up through the night,
ranting to you about how hard it is to win the fight.
me knowing how much you care,
you not realizing that there's so much more there.
so much i'm not saying,
so much,
my soul's decaying.

you don't hear all the things i'll never say,
and how they haunt me every day.
all the things i'll never say,
and how they only add to the pain.
all the things i'll never say,
all the things i'll never do.
all the feelings i'll always hide,
burying it all inside,
and how i'm so damn in love with you.

all i wanna do is scream so damn loud,
i wanna stop going around and around.
circling these feelings forever,
causing me to drown.
to drown in my own love for you.
my god, i'm through.

i wish you could hear all the things i'll never say,
and how they haunt me every day.
all the things i'll never say,
and how they only add to the pain.
all the things i'll never say,
all the things i'll never do.
all the feelings i'll always hide,
burying it all inside,
and how i'm so damn in love with you.

this one’s like a spin off of “all the things I’ll never say” lol

“all the things I finally said”

the way you smile in the dim light,
the way I want to hold you late at night.
the way I wish I could be here forever,
holding your hands as everything is uncovered.

all the things I finally said,
I was able to clear my head.
all the feelings I no longer have to hide,
burying it all inside.
you now know,
how I’m so in love with you,
and how I could never let you go.

I wish this moment could last an eternity,
the way you were forever undone by me
I wish I could lean up,
run my hands through your hair,
without a care,
and kiss you longingly.
would you do the same to me?

you finally got to hear,
all the things I’ve wanted to say,
if only you knew the way they haunted me every day,
and how they only added to the pain.
all the things I finally said,
all the things I could finally do,
and how I’m so damn in love with you.

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "These are beautiful thanks for all the lovely shares my dears 💗💗"

thanketh you naji mcnajerson <3

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "Thank u marshmallow mcmaridethson 💗"

💕💕

naji i wrote one about the moon!