Poetry Point discussion

Strawberryboy wrote: "i wrote this a bit ago, and I'm thinking up a couple of new stanzas

My longest friend for quite some time
The one who first taught me rhythm and rhyme
She knows all my secrets and she loves me st..."

this is beautiful

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "TODAYS PROMPT IS…. the moon"

the moon:? holy moly i'm going to make one about how it is made out of cheese :DDD

mack and naji omgggg those are beautiful <33

write about the moon? hmm

you're like the tide,
pulling my into heart into the sea.
allowing me to finally be free.
you're like the moon,
your reflection lighting up the dark,
creating such a beautiful spark.

blehhhh
i don't like it lol

hmmmm I wonderrrrrrr

here is meh moon poem

there was once a man named calhoun
he had a fascination with the moon
it is a shame he ate the moon so soon
he ate it all up with a spoon
in the summer month of june
it was late afternoon
calhoun flew up in a balloon
he made a pit stop at his favoite saloon
he almost chrashed into a lagoon
he ate some rangoon
that was quite maroon
he looked like a baboon
in reality he was a tycoon
who always looked forward to the monsoon
he had a pet racoon
who loved to watched cartoons
now back to the moon
it looked like a cocoon
it was very immune
to the wrath of calhoun
it crashed down into cancoun
how inopportune!

you are my moon,
i am your sun,
we'll see each other soon,
and together, be one.
but who knows,
i may never meet you,
but i know you're there,
for now we are two,
drowning in despair.

it sucks sm but wanted to hop on the moon train :)

SWARA I LOVE ITTTT
I love how your poems are funny ehehe

THESE ARE SO FUN I GET WHAT YALL ARE SAYING

fi fi ʚ♡ɞ .°₊ wrote: "you are my moon,
i am your sun,
we'll see each other soon,
and together, be one.
but who knows,
i may never meet you,
but i know you're there,
for now we are two,
drowning in despair.

it sucks sm..."

I love it!!

holy moly fifi that is really good and NO it doesnt suck at all <33

JSJSJSJ noo you guys are so talented, mine is so maladroit compared to all of yours :0

fi fi ʚ♡ɞ .°₊ wrote: "JSJSJSJ noo you guys are so talented, mine is so maladroit compared to all of yours :0"

NO SHUSHHH

fi fi ʚ♡ɞ .°₊ wrote: "JSJSJSJ noo you guys are so talented, mine is so maladroit compared to all of yours :0"

mine is literal bullshirt compared to yours <333 it's really poetic and lyrical now hush

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "Hushhhh love!! The only rule is that nothing is to be called bad EVERRR art is art and it’s all beautiful imperfections are a form of freedom. You’re berry talented <3"

YOU HYPOCRITE

agh fine only because it's a rule, but i stand by my case, you three are way more awesome at writing 😩

wannabe inej ghafa wrote: "fi fi ʚ♡ɞ .°₊ wrote: "JSJSJSJ noo you guys are so talented, mine is so maladroit compared to all of yours :0"

mine is literal bullshirt compared to yours <333 it's really poetic and lyrical now hush"

SWARA SHUSH
yours are so funny i love them

okay okay, you're right, now i will not bash myself, but you are all so talented, i'm always so in awe reading the poems coming through here :0

NAJIIIII
that’s beautiful <<33

what's today's prompt naji? :)

maybe we could do like 3 or 5 prompts per week ....you can write on all the prompts or any no. of prompts you wish. Keep a fixed day,
let's say for example Monday so prompts would be updated every MondayAny two people can be given
this task, in case one is busy or forgets.

Just a suggestion. Whatya say?

keya bestie happy birthdayyyyyy

Thank you so so much!!!!

This one was pretty hard for me to write, being very honest. Hopefully it fits the prompt (not sure). All I can say that it is based on true events from my life. Enjoy.

I had four friends
One downtown, one uphill
One by my side and one holding my back
They'd be the one to stretch my smile
They'd be the one to wipe my tears
Happiest of all,
I had everyone one could dream

Not long it took
When I saw one with another 'friend'
How easily she had slipped away
How easily I was replaced.
Erased.

But I was happy,
I had three
Soon to be two
When one would backstab
Who knew she loved the taste of betray?

Over and over
I was robbed of my smile
But I had two
To pick me up and clean my messes
I still remember the day I sobbed my heart out
How could another one do this to me?
Walls of distrust erupted
Leading to nothing but fights and troubles.

Now I stood on just one stick
Who knows how long she'll stay?
I was looking for a happy ever after
My hopes crashed and I just stood there
Waving her goodbye
As she took off to California.
Forever

I had learnt a lot
Beaten and bruised and blue
I trust no one now
Lonely and weeping in dark
But there is still hope in me
The flicker that would never fade
I still wait for a friend
That would be with me from start to end.

-Keya

can I still write one about the moon

yes!

holyyyy moly keya!
im going to write one after lunch

ALSO YALL IT'S BESTIE KEYA'S BIRTHDAYYYYY

Happy birthday Keyaa

me meme ememememem i would I would

O MY GODDDD

WOAH

good is an understatement love

naji what are you talking about that is amazing you have no clue how talented you are

YES OMG WE SHOULD MAKE IT A RAP
I SHALL ENLIST NF

YOU KNOW I NEVER REALLY FIT IN: NAJI THE NOODLE FT. NF

YES PLSSSSSS

i can rap guns and ships faster than daveed diggs does (and it's the fastest song on broadway) so i can help uwu

it's beautiful + heartbreaking + gorgeously written :(((<3333 don't be self conscious about this one, everyone loves it, i'm 100% sure <3

wowwza... but listen to guns and ships :D

YESSS STAN THAT

okkkk

yesh it's ok, i can delete it if you wish

ur welcomey welcome

wait where is the reverb?

ohhh ur making it nvm

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "Todays prompt is “not fitting in”, “feeling out of place”."

YESSSS IM MAKING ONE AS WE SPEAK

WHAT DO YALL THINKKK
this one's also kinda a love poem ehehe

One day there was a woman named Grace
she was dismayed as she felt out of place
Yes, this was unfortunately the case
She did not like her face
She could never hit first base
She made clothes out of lace
Her parents called her a disgrace
She had never been given an embrace
Then one day came along a guy named Wace
He reassured her that she was in her place
He made sure that she loved her face
As it was quite the face
They hit first base
They both made clothes out of lace
He slapped her parents who called her a disgrace
He left not a trace
He gave her an embrace
Grace finally felt in her place
They each ate grapes
And gave each other updates
And made sure not to displace
And each went at their own pace
They made many plates
Enough to fill many crates
There is no debate
Grace and Wace are interlaced

MARY COME LOOK AT MY "LOVE" POEM

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "ALSO YALL IT'S BESTIE KEYA'S BIRTHDAYYYYY"

Thank you so much!! Now I am smiling way to wide :))

aston mcasterson!!!(Semi Hiatus) wrote: "Happy birthday Keyaa"

Thank you Aston!!!!!

iz ok naji mcnajerson <33