Poetry Point discussion

i dont want to try collaborating with someone on a poem. i think i am in the wrong place. i am lost.

Everything I do, nothing is right

Out in the far, in the depths of abyss

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "One second you're happy,
and the next you're not.
Why must our hearts be left to rot?

When did all of it start,
will it ever stop?
Why must our hearts be torn apart?

One second you're yellow,
the..."

I wish we could just be,
wish we could count for something.
when will our hearts be set free?

idk

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "That’s not bad 🤔"

ahahaha
I tried

wait
wait

I wish we could just be,
when will our hearts be set free?
I wish there wasn’t so much pain,
will we ever be okay?

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "Thanks love, it’s really good I might use it but you know I’m extremely indecisive and I have ocd so it has to match the hydra like Mack said"

no I get that <3

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "I wish we could just be
Was it all done in vain
When will our hearts be set free

??"

OH YESSSS

I have an idea for the next stanza lol :D

I wish we could be okay,
no one there to talk us down.
why can’t our hearts float away?

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "I love it!!!! But um the next stanza has a different rhyme scheme"

wait how am I rhyming
I’m confuseddd

AHHH YESSS

stop this was just you writing an amazing poem and me sitting back and being here for moral support dheksjehshswu

hush up mary i'm sure you contributed

yall need to work on yall's selfworth

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "I genuinely couldn’t have done it without your help love so tyyyy—- and the stanzas have alternating rhyme schemes, look again I typed out the letter scheme for you. The same letters means that it ..."

ohhh otay that makes sense

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "hush up mary i'm sure you contributed

yall need to work on yall's selfworth"

you’re funny lol

naji stop you are literally a queen and you are so resilient and brave and extraordinary and literally amazing and not to mention hot asf (jk lol but u iz bewwy pwetty)

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "Self-worth? What is that?? 🤣🤣🤣"

I wish I knew :D

you too mary
you're also resilient, brave, charismatic, gracious, and amazing, and you're very hot too <33

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "you too mary
you're also resilient, brave, charismatic, gracious, and amazing, and you're very hot too <33"

thank you my love <3

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "Thanks my love I appreciate it 💗💗


YOU KNOW HOW COMPLIMENTS GO IN ONE EAR AND OUT THE OTHER?!
imagine that happened with negativity HA we’d be drunk in self worth is that happened. Yeah no one tee..."

NO LITERALLY
omg all I think about is the negative things

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "They said have hope like it’s the worlds easiest thing
I’m stuck in winter when everybody’s living in spring"

can't you see that i'm lost,
wondering when all of this will stop?

pls someone help i read mary's last line as "i wonder when someone will make soup"

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "pls someone help i read mary's last line as "i wonder when someone will make soup""

acomaf????

Naji Mcnajerson wrote: "Is it worth continuing?"

YES

mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "pls someone help i read mary's last line as "i wonder when someone will make soup""

acomaf????"

NO OH MY GOD-

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "pls someone help i read mary's last line as "i wonder when someone will make soup""

acomaf????"

NO OH MY GOD-"

AHAHAHA
"his growls of pleasure....."

"i want you splayed out on the......."

yes yes yes

okay
okay
i'm sorry

"the considerable length of him sprang out"

im scared

mom pick me up i wanna go home

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: ""the considerable length of him sprang out""

NO-

fi fi ʚĭɞ ‧₊˚ wrote: "im scared"

we're quoting sjm :D

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "yes yes yes"

hehehehehe

mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "fi fi ʚĭɞ ‧₊˚ wrote: "im scared"

we're quoting sjm :D"

pls i just got acomaf from the library KAMAJSKS

fi fi ʚĭɞ ‧₊˚ wrote: "mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "fi fi ʚĭɞ ‧₊˚ wrote: "im scared"

we're quoting sjm :D"

pls i just got acomaf from the library KAMAJSKS"

OH- uhhh enjoy the smut

sowwyyyy ehehehe
OOO!! this is a pg quote!! no it isn't

"you're my sister," he said finally. "my blood. my family...."

okay that's all
do with that what you will

HEYYY i didn't write it!!!

sjm didn't write it either :D :D :D

that one would be cassie clare

otayyy fineeeeee

mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "sowwyyyy ehehehe
OOO!! this is a pg quote!! no it isn't

"you're my sister," he said finally. "my blood. my family...."

okay that's all
do with that what you will"

MARY THAT IS LIKE ONE OF MY FAVORITE BOOKS

mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "that one would be cassie clare"

i LOVE CASSIE CLARE WITH ALL MY SOUL FOR YOUR INFORMATION

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "sowwyyyy ehehehe
OOO!! this is a pg quote!! no it isn't

"you're my sister," he said finally. "my blood. my family...."

okay that's all
do..."

SWARA-
NO INCEST BOOKS

MARY
THAT IS NOT INCEST AT ALL
PEOPLE MISREAD THE HELL OUT OF IT
YOU WOULD KNOW IF YOU HAD ACTUALLY READ A SINGLE BOOK I RECOMMENDED YOU CHICKEN FRIED FUCK

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "MARY
THAT IS NOT INCEST AT ALL
PEOPLE MISREAD THE HELL OUT OF IT
YOU WOULD KNOW IF YOU HAD ACTUALLY READ A SINGLE BOOK I RECOMMENDED YOU CHICKEN FRIED FUCK"

.......anyways

I READ SHATTER ME

i meannnnn..... "you are my sister" seems pretty incest to me

MARY THE CHICKEN FRIED FUCK

mary (if a man talks sh*t then i owe him nothing) wrote: "i meannnnn..... "you are my sister" seems pretty incest to me"

god-
i cant explain it without giving away the whole plot but the whole series and all of the shadowhunter books are literally god-tier so um

✨wannabe inej ghafa✨ wrote: "MARY THE CHICKEN FRIED FUCK"

:0