Pyro’s Den discussion

In this section, authors/writers can get feedback on what they are writing.

I'm writing a scene and I'm wondering if a certain post is creepy enough.

What book is the scene in? And are you posting it here for help?

Redacted, a newer scene. I can.

Here's the post:
You know the saying, ‘it’s what is on the inside that counts.’ I was interested to see if that was true, are your insides as beautiful as what is on the outside, Ally?