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Felt like I was standing right there in the rain with you
wow, thank you!!! That's a really big compliment to me. :D
You're welcome. Poetry was the first thing I started writing. After that I fell in love with one kind of writing after another. You never know where those first lines you scribbled will take you. :)
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Great poem, I especially love the last two lines!
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you’re all so sweet and encouraging! Thank you so much! :)
Remembering
Faded green slide dripping water,
Empty swings tangled together.
Now all soggy, tired, cold,
Laughter, shouts, they no longer hold.
The sun is hidden, the fields are bare,
Cold, wet wind brushes through my hair.
A simple scene from years gone by,
Haunted by a quiet sigh.
Forgotten? Impossible! Never!
But now watch the scene and remember,
Nothing ever lasts forever.