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message 1: by Ruth (new)

Ruth My poem, The Moon Illusion, is now up on As it Ought To Be. This poem began many years ago, and then lay fallow in my unfinished poems file. Recently I dug it out and did a drastic edit and here it is. There’s nothing like the passage of time to give you perspective on something you’ve written.

https://asitoughttobemagazine.com/202...


message 2: by Connie (new)

Connie  G (connie_g) | 465 comments Lovely poem, Ruth.


message 3: by Ruth (new)

Ruth Thank you, Connie!


message 4: by Dirk, Moderator (new)

Dirk Van | 4641 comments Another nice one Ruth.
I get the felling about "time" and "healing"
But am not sure about "the price the collector is willing to pay"
Blame it on English being my second language ;-)


message 5: by Ruth (last edited Dec 15, 2023 08:40PM) (new)

Ruth Thanks Dirk. What I was thinking when I wrote that is that we each have our own ways of dealing with loss and must come to a balance of our own device.


message 6: by Victoria (new)

Victoria Anne | 1 comments I really loved this poem. I’ve experienced loss before but at the beginning of this year I lost one of the most influential and important people in my life. I saw many reflections of myself in this poem and the thoughts I’ve had as time has gone on. Thank you for such a lovely poem 🧡🌿


message 7: by Ruth (new)

Ruth Thank you, Victoria!


message 8: by Dina (new)

Dina | 1 comments Your poem touched me deeply , it’s so beautifully written ,Thank you for your words.
Do you share more of your poetry somewhere? I’d love to read more of your work.❤️❤️


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