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Hey folks, I'm working on a book and I think the first act is too slow.

I'm looking for beta readers to give me feedback on the first few chapters, as well as a prologue I'm not sure I want to include. It's more suspenseful and exciting, which is good to get people on board, but it's about a character that, while major, shows up ~20k words in.

Even if you start it but get bored partway through, leaving a brief comment on the page you stopped at would be really helpful so I know which parts I need to tighten up.

CW: Anxiety/Panic attacks, drug references.

DM me for the link. Feel free to leave comments inside the document or on this thread here. Please be kind but honest. Thanks in advance for your help <3

Hey! I would love to beta read :)

Callum wrote: "Hey! I would love to beta read :)"

Thank you so much <3 I DM'd you

I would like to beta read as well . :)

i'd be happy to beta read for you!! :-)

Allegra wrote: "I would like to beta read as well . :)"
You've been a huge help, thanks so much 🧡

Sofia wrote: "i'd be happy to beta read for you!! :-)"

Thank you! I sent you a dm, lmk if you have any trouble with the link

i'd be interested to beta read as well 🤍

Noah wrote: "I'd be interested, too! Although I don't know when I'll be able to get to it properly, as I'm approaching my next tests for university :S"

There's no rush at all, only read as much as you feel like, any help is welcome (: I'll dm you the link

shreya wrote: "i'd be interested to beta read as well 🤍"

Thanks 🧡 I'll DM you

I would love to beta read

I'd also love to beta read!!

Mirror wrote: "I would love to beta read"

Thank you! <3 I'll dm the link over

Mirror wrote: "I would love to beta read"

Waaa thank you as well!!

I’d love to beta read also, if you need anymore readers that is!

Lauren wrote: "I’d love to beta read also, if you need anymore readers that is!"

Always (: I'll DM you the link

Hey I would love to beta-read if still possible

Thom wrote: "Hey I would love to beta-read if still possible"
Of course! Just shoot me a DM and I'll send you the link 🧡 Thank you so much! This group has been so helpful and supportive ;~;

hei! If it's still possible i would Iove to beta read!!!

ina wrote: "hei! If it's still possible i would Iove to beta read!!!" I'd appreciate that, ina, thanks 🧡 I sent you a friend request, or you can just message me first and I'll DM you the link! Thank you!