Writing in your Heart discussion

If you have shared part of a story then hopefully your advice will be located here, I'll ask those who are posting advice here to name the user who they are giving advice to - then post their advice. If you just want to look at advice then I have no problem with that, have fun folks!

Okay so this advice is for Alexandra. I have just started reading Outcasts on Wattpad and it is amazing! I'm already addicted to it, my first piece of advice for you would be to re-read your work and check for any spelling/ typo errors. I have spotted a few but they were just typo's. So far the character Claire is well developed and your writers voice is very good at hooking people in.

I love that you have the reader kept in the dark about why Claire is running and only give brief glimpses of her pas; this serves you well to keep the readers attention making sure that it doesn't waver.

I love Fred's line at the end of the third chapter? Anyway it made me smile, especially when Claire said she did the most logical thing and fainted it. ;)

I loved it!

Thank you!!! I really hope to publish this one some day! :)

You totally should!! I would buy a copy of it! ;)

Hayley wrote: "You totally should!! I would buy a copy of it! ;)"

HAHAH! I will cry from joy when that time comes! I hope to find a publisher... :)
Thank you for your words! :)

You could always self publish. Check out the publishing section of our group run by Sarah - it could help you find the right publisher and editor. And you're welcome for my words. ;)