Alpha Betas discussion

Hello!
I am looking for a couple beta readers for my portal fantasy story that borders on dark fantasy. Here is the blurb:

The FMC is a dreamer and romantic that always has her head in the clouds. One day, a portal opens up and she takes a chance and steps through it, hoping to find her happily ever after.
She quickly learns that the grass is not always greener. On the surface, her new home is a utopia, but she soon discovers dark secrets lie beneath its foundation. Her dreams and nightmares are plagued by a ghost begging to be found. Will learning the city's secrets free her or jeopardize her life?

At this time, the story is primarily in the FMC's POV with several chapters from a different POV.


Current Tropes:
3rd person/Multi Povs
Fish out of water
Hero's Journey

Current Triggers:
Mild Adult language
Violence/Murder/War/Bloodshed
Anxiety
Nightmares
Note: I am still working out the trope & trigger list. Feedback would be helpful in this area as well.

I would like to have notes back by the middle of October so I can have time to re-work what I need to before sending it to my editor.

If you would to know more please feel free to message me! Or you can sign up to read here: https://forms.gle/DpJ6X5ceX2Qd59af6

S.A. wrote: "Hello!
I am looking for a couple beta readers for my portal fantasy story that borders on dark fantasy. Here is the blurb:

The FMC is a dreamer and romantic that always has her head in the cloud..."

Hi ,
Congratulations on completing your book. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced beta reading services. I am a very huge fan of dark fantasy, so yes, I am very interested in reading your work. I am running a free first chapter read and $0.0008 per word for the remaining chapters. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks so this should fit your October timeline. I will fill out your form but just incase you see this first, my deliverables includes;

- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.

You can check the link below for my testimonials
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

You can reach me at basseyblessing118@gmail.com or reply under this thread, let's work together

Will Raywood
Hi S.A.,
Are you still looking for beta readers? I like the premise of your story, and as a fan of dark fantasy, I’d be happy to beta read. Completely free, of course.
All the best

Hi,
I'm a freelance beta reader available to give detailed and informative critique on plot, pacing, dialogue and overall thoughts for a reasonable price of $10 for 10,000 words . If you want someone who isn't flaky, someone who will actually give you real feedback with clear answers. I'm exactly who you're looking for.
Yours sincerely,
Glory.
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