Alpha Betas discussion

Hello, and thank you for taking the time to read this.

I’m currently looking for a few thoughtful beta readers for my novel Fractured, the first book in a planned paranormal drama series. The story explores themes of loss, loyalty, love, and the quiet strength it takes to move forward after everything falls apart. It’s character-driven, emotional, and rooted in a world that blurs the line between human and otherworldly.

Without revealing too much, Fractured follows individuals bound by fate and scarred by tragedy—each searching for redemption in their own way. It’s a story about grief and connection, about the bonds that break us and the ones that make us whole again.

I’m seeking honest, constructive feedback on:
• Grammar, spelling, and readability
• Flow and pacing—does the story feel balanced and engaging?
• Character depth—are they believable, relatable, and interesting to follow?
• Plot and tone—does it hold your attention and feel cohesive throughout?
• Series potential—does this book leave you wanting to know what comes next?

If you enjoy grounded, emotionally layered stories with a touch of the paranormal and a focus on complex relationships, I’d truly appreciate your perspective.

Thank you for considering being part of this process. Your feedback means a great deal and will help shape the direction of the series going forward.

— Jennie

Jen wrote: "Hello, and thank you for taking the time to read this.

I’m currently looking for a few thoughtful beta readers for my novel Fractured, the first book in a planned paranormal drama series. The stor..."

Hi Jen,
Congratulations on completing your book. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced beta reading and proofreading services. I am interested in reading your manuscript. I am running a free first chapter read and $0.0008 per word for the remaining chapters. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks. 

My deliverables includes;
- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.

You can check the link below for my testimonials
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/... or my website https://penandreads.wordpress.com/

You can reach me at basseyblessing118@gmail.com or reply under this thread, let's work together

Jen wrote: "Hello, and thank you for taking the time to read this.

I’m currently looking for a few thoughtful beta readers for my novel Fractured, the first book in a planned paranormal drama series. The stor..."

Hello Jen,

I've just read the concept of your manuscript and I like the fact you didn’t let off too much on the details of the story. Now I’m wondering how love connects to the paranormal. Did someone die? Who died? I think this is a really good book you got. I think it’s something I’ll enjoy.

However, I am a paid beta reader and editor. I have a couple years of experience across multiple genres, and I can provide a detailed analysis of your manuscript. I also noticed you have specific requests, that would be fine by me, as it’s within my usual deliverables.

I offer:
* Feedback on characters, pacing, plot, tension, and suspense.
* Honest in-line comments and reactions in your manuscript.
* A detailed report summarizing your story’s strengths and areas to improve.
* Typos corrected (if you’re okay with it!).
* Actionable suggestions to enhance your work.
* Ongoing support—I’m always here to answer your questions.

My rate is $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7-day turnaround. You can view testimonials and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/

If you're interested, please contact me at ikthebeardman@gmail.com

I'm excited about the possibility of working with you to bring your vision to life.

Best regards,
Ik

Hi Jennie,
I like the premise of your story. I'd be happy to beta read and offer some constructive feedback. Would you be interested in doing a beta swap?

Helloo,
I would be happy to read and give you the requested observations.
Please hit my DM with it if you’re still taking beta readers ☺️☺️

Jen wrote: "Hello, and thank you for taking the time to read this.

I’m currently looking for a few thoughtful beta readers for my novel Fractured, the first book in a planned paranormal drama series. The stor..."

Hi Jen!

I’m a beta reader offering affordable, fully human feedback for all Romance subgenres and Fantasy fiction.

What You'll Get?
• Overview
• Summary (Reader’s Perspective)
• Character Development
• Plot Flow & pacing
• Area for improvement
• Suggestions for Improvement
• Detailed Reader Report (1-3)+

If you’re still looking for beta readers, I’d love to work with you. I can also share a sample of my report so you can see my feedback style. I’m available on Fiverr for secure booking.
No pressure at all — just letting you know I’m available!✨

Hey,

I'm a moderator of a different group. Just an FYI: TheBeta is a scam account and you do have to be careful around here because sadly Goodreads does have a bit of a problem in that regard. Best,

Lisa

"Ann" is most likely a scam account. Best,

Lisa