Ospreys question

Ospreys
Hi,

I have just translated my first novel - Ospreys - from Norwegian to English and I'm excited what you think about it. My question is if the translation is any good? I have translated it myself with the help of translater software and a lot of hours reading and adapting the language. I'm not a native speaker of English so I really need a pointer if this is worth doing with the next books in the series? If someone would like to write a review I'll be glad to send over a writers copy (ePub or PDF). This is the first book in the series where we follow Erling Ravnåker and his colleauges in the Norwegian Security Service in a thrilling manhunt. I'm currently translating the second book - Akula - and hope it will be awailable in English before Christmas. All the best - Arnar Vik