Beta readers and author discussion

Hey, I'm a new writer and illustrator working on my first full book project, a high fantasy book that will be the first of a trilogy called The Shadow in the Sunlight. I currently don't have a large budget, so I would like to test the waters to see where I'm at and work out some kinks before I move on to an editor. The areas I most want to test would be the story's general flow, any consistent grammatical or structural mistakes I make, and clarity of prose. The nature of this is something I plan to be general, as there is no pay and it's a large manuscript, so all I ask is engage as much as you want or can and let me know what I can fix and build upon.

The novel explores groups of creatures, ones I either made or added unique features to, and their relationships to each other, themselves, and their gods, as their world gets closer to another continent-wide war. It follows characters on both sides, but focuses on a newly born child of a race called the shades, a deeply interconnected and fast aging group of creatures of shadow and crystal that have been feared and hated since their creation for their relation to the dark. The story looks at how he is forced to grow quickly as he becomes the catalyst for burgeoning tensions he had no knowledge of and how he adapts and learns in this situation that could lead to the destruction of his people. The plan with the series will be to start exploring a universe that has a building and changing mythology and exploring different stories in this ever shifting world.

If you have any questions, suggestions, or advice, feel free to message me or comment down below!

I'm now taking paid beta readers as well, specifically those interested in high fantasy.

Hi there! Sounds interesting, you can PM me if you want!

Send me a mail at patsoumas95@gmail.com.

Hey Joseph,

I'd certainly be interested. Just a word to the wise: please be careful of scammers around these parts.

If you'd like to chat further, please DM me on here. Thanks,

Lisa

Joseph wrote: "Hey, I'm a new writer and illustrator working on my first full book project, a high fantasy book that will be the first of a trilogy called The Shadow in the Sunlight. I currently don't have a larg..."

Hello Joseph,

I've just read the blurb for your manuscript. I think concept you've created is captivating. The plot of a child bearing the weight of a race and trying to navigate life already sounds so interesting. I’ve always been a strong lover of fantasy books and movies, and I’d love to read yours.

However, I am a paid beta reader and editor. I have a couple years of experience across multiple genres, and I can provide a detailed analysis of your manuscript.

I offer:
* Feedback on characters, pacing, plot, tension, and suspense.
* Honest in-line comments and reactions in your manuscript.
* A detailed report summarizing your story’s strengths and areas to improve.
* Typos corrected (if you’re okay with it!).
* Actionable suggestions to enhance your work.
* Ongoing support—I’m always here to answer your questions.

My rate is $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7-day turnaround. You can view testimonials and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/

If you're interested, please contact me at ikthebeardman@gmail.com

I'm excited about the possibility of working with you to bring your vision to life.

Best regards,
Ik

Joseph wrote: "I'm now taking paid beta readers as well, specifically those interested in high fantasy."

Joseph wrote: "Hey, I'm a new writer and illustrator working on my first full book project, a high fantasy book that will be the first of a trilogy called The Shadow in the Sunlight. I currently don't have a larg..."

Hi Joseph

Congratulations on completing your book. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced beta reading services. I just finished beta reading a high fantasy novel so yes I am interested in taking another ride with you. I am running a free first chapter read and $0.0008 per word for the remaining chapters. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks. 

My deliverables includes;
- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.

You can check the link below for my testimonials
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/... or my website https://penandreads.wordpress.com/

You can reach me at basseyblessing118@gmail.com or reply under this thread, let's work together

Joseph wrote: "I'm now taking paid beta readers as well, specifically those interested in high fantasy."

Hi Joseph!

I always love unique fantasy books that stray away from the norm, so i'm definitely interested! High fantasy is one of my favorite genres and I'm currently reading one. I'd love to work with you if you'll have me. Please check out my website: https://bibliobeastreads.wordpress.com/

Thank you!