people-stuck-on-chapter-1 discussion
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pretty much there's these six kids traumatized teens are sent to a camp for the summer (ex of trauma: one was framed for arson 💕) because their parents think they are mentally ill or something (literally none of them actually are)
in the first chapter i introduce most the characters (im writing from lyra--one of the character's--perspective) and i also introduce her future love interest.. is it weird that she's like a rlly quiet person but rambles when she's nervous? and she like immediately thinks that everett (future love interest) is hot? she's not the kind of person to fall for looks, more for personality, but it's kinda jsut a fact that everett is hot, not rlly an opinion. so she like stops and stares for a sec and is like "oh i want to get to know himmm" (not at all what she says but pretty much sums it up lol) idk im kinda struggling bc i know shes not the type to fall for looks but i also know that she thinks everett is hot
and also plot twist only like three of them (excluding the camp counselor) survive cuz there's this like monster in the woods surrounding the camp that like kills em
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so basically there’s Soledad that is a forger, Caleb is a musician, Zayn is a persuader and H..."
that's sounds so good! i'd love to read it sometime <3 where does the romance part come in?? like who ends up with who lol?
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I absolutely love it, def gonna read it ;)
I already kin your mc honestly😗
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100% Soledad is gonna end up with Caleb: it’s like a childhood best friends to rivals to lovers. he’s practically smitten since chapter 1, but she’s an emotionless baddie that doesn’t want to show her emotions (…ugh. I hate this type of characters🙄🙄)
then I was thinking about making Zayn single (I already hate that guy idk why)
aaand Hypatia I don’t really know actually. maybe someone in book 2?🤔
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girl trust me, learning languages is sooo fun! my favourite one must be English, but since you already speak it I’m going to suggest you to learn Spanish first ;) the grammar is pretty easy to understand‼️
so basically there’s Soledad that is a forger, Caleb is a musician, Zayn is a persuader and Hypatia doesn’t belong to any category :)
in chapter one I’ve just introduced Soledad, Caleb and Zayn, but in chapter two Hypatia is going to join them.
I plan to make them realise that the system of the city (Artopia) is corrupted in a few chapters and I’d like to make them start a revolution🤭
I’m already planning book two too!! the world building is gonna change COMPLETELY. in fact there is going to be a new city: Sciepolis, where science is the main focus.
book three? I’ve got some vague ideas…maybe a war between the two cities? I still don’t know though🤷🏻♀️