I entered a short story into a contest and have got some great reviews (http://toptenbookreview.com/?p=732) since it went live. However, reviews aren't really for feedback and I am embarking on a huge short story anthology, so I want to know where I hit the mark and where I didn't. In short, were you ever pulled out of the story and were you creeped out/scared/offended sufficiently?
The download is free, so have at it. https://freeditorial.com/en/books/rot