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If you'll forgive my moment of self-promotion, I'd like to announce that the sequel to my debut novel listed above has been released. Called The Know Circuit, it is available in paperback and eBook on Amazon, the Kindle store, Smashwords and will eventually show up other places. As always, I'm available for questions if you have any. Gary
Just bought Under the Amoral Bridge from Amazon. About 25% in, so far I quite like it. I'll write a full review when I'm done.
I'm 42% in now, I like it quite a bit. I think your world building is very good; I like the political edge to the atmosphere. The plot is strong. I like the way that your writing shows a bit of noir influence, it's sort of Chandler-esque cyberpunk. The only criticism I have is in the first couple chapters you tend to especially use a lot of ten dollar words that feel forced in; there are a lot of times where I feel like simpler language would have gotten the point across. Really, though, it's a minor quibble and probably just a personal thing. Really enjoying it so far.
I'm a new author. My novel Running Black is a near-future espionage thriller and sort of a 'proto-cyberpunk' piece. Feedback is welcome.Gary - your book is on my Wishlist.
Books mentioned in this topic
Running Black (other topics)The Know Circuit (other topics)
Under the Amoral Bridge (other topics)


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