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message 1: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet Jonathan was sitting down in the garden, reading a book.

Rose was on her way to town to buy some apples.


message 2: by RedPath (new)

RedPath Erica hustled around the ballroom, trying to serve all of the drunken guests. She wiped some sweat from her brow and hoisted the tray up, balancing it procariously on her shoulder.


message 3: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet Jonathan saw a girl run out and looked up from his book.

Rose sighed, she bought the apples and brought them back to the ball.


message 4: by RedPath (last edited Dec 11, 2009 04:44PM) (new)

RedPath Erica noticed Elizabeth leave, and sighed, "Her father won't be happy....," she muttered.


message 5: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet Jonathan stood up and put his book down before running after her. "Hey, Miss! Stop." He said as she ran, swaying slightly.

Rose put the apples down and changed into the waitress uniform, walking out and serving guests.


message 6: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet Rose looked up at Anthony as she passed. "Sir, if your sister is Milady Elizabeth, she went for a walk."

Jonathan looked at her. "are you okay?"


message 7: by RedPath (new)

RedPath A gentleman at the table she was passing knocked over a glass of wine. He scowled, "Clean this up, wench!" the man slurred. Erica held her tongue and went to work.


message 8: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He smiled slightly. "Your lady Elizabeth." he said possitive.

Rose shook her head. "please Sir, don't call me that...if one of the rulers hear, there not going to be very happy with me."


message 9: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He shook his head. "Beg my pardon Milady. I'm Jonathan." He bowed formally. "Your father asked me to come and meet you..." He sighed. "i'm sorry that i didn't come inside to dance with you, but i've just had enough with people trying to set other people up with ones they haven't met."

She shook her head. "I'm a women Sir...but i'm not high ranked as i was before."


message 10: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He smiled slightly. "Don't apologize, i find it a pleasure meeting you on my own."

She nodded. "Thankyou Sir, but i ask again...if you are going to recognize me as a lady...wai until one of my masters aren't around. Because well they are around...there is always a possibility that they can hear."


message 11: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He nodded, understanding. "Like sometimes it's just to much...like your suppose to be doing something different with your life? liveing it the way you want to."

She smiled. "Well, i'm sure my masters would prefer you call my girl, or wench, or servant...which you can if you want Sir." She sighed. "but, my names Rose."


message 12: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He smiled slightly. "exactly...i just wish our parents would see that we have our own lives to live and decide what we do with them."

She smiled slightly. "am i permitted to add a 'Sir' before your name?"



message 13: by RedPath (new)

RedPath ((XC bye.......))


message 14: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He nodded. "no, we can't, but yet thay still try to make us into what they think we should be." He sighed.

"How aout we make a deal?" She asked. "when were around people that can punish me, then i say Sir...but when were not, i'll just call you by your name." She said. "deal Sir Anthony?"

((byez))


message 15: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet She curtsied formally and showed him the tray. "Snacks Sir?"

He nodded. "Well Lady Elizabeth, it's been a pleasure meeting you." He siad and kissed the back of her hand before lettting it go.


message 16: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He nodded and smiled. "great party." He smirked before walking back towards the garden.

She nodded and knelt down so he could pick from the tray. "Help yourself."


message 17: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He smiled and sat down by the foutain with his book again.

She nodded and stood back up. "Your welcome Sir."


message 18: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet Rose sighed and walked around then room, when she tripped over one on the rulers bags that they had put on the floor right before she was about to step. Her plate went fly as the snacks landed on some of the guests and her.

Jonathan sighed, reading pride and prejiduce.


message 19: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet Rose looked up at the people, covered in food. The expressions on the face before her were shocked and angered as some of the hosts and masters made there way over.


message 20: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet Rose looked at him for a second, warning him not to interfer, before she was pulled to her feet by her hair. "You wench! Clutz! How disrespectful!" People yelled at her from all different directioins.


message 21: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet She was pushed back to the ground. "Clean it girl!"She nodded and hurried to start cleaning, knowing that there would be more punishments waiting for her when she was out of public's eye.


message 22: by RedPath (new)

RedPath Erica saw it happen, and knelt to her knees and helped Rose clean.


message 23: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet Rose looked att Erica and shook her head. "Your going to get in trouble Erica...stop."


message 24: by RedPath (new)

RedPath She raised an eyebrow, "Has that ever stopped me before?"


message 25: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet She smiled slightly. "No...but i'm not gunna let you take another beating for me, not this time..." She muttered and looked behind Erica where a man was making his way towards them. "And apperently neither will the master."


message 26: by RedPath (new)

RedPath Erica frowned, "Just keep your head down and look sorry." She muttered, scrubbing harder.


message 27: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet She smirked. "And when have i ever done that? You know perfectly well that i'm pretty opinionated.


message 28: by Lyric (new)

Lyric Mermaidan (ambrosiadaughterofzeus) | 2204 comments Thea walked around town snickering to her self. Her red dress swirling around her legs.
(( http://redhotbrides.com/blog/media/bl... ))


message 29: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet She continued cleaning as the man pushed Erica out of the way and grabbed Rose. "Looks like you need to be taught more disipline." He said to her and drag her through the watching crowd.

Jonathan heard someone walking and looked up to see Elizabeth again. he smiled.


message 30: by Lyric (new)

Lyric Mermaidan (ambrosiadaughterofzeus) | 2204 comments Thea saw this and glared at the man pulling Rose


message 31: by RedPath (new)

RedPath Erica tumbled to the ground as she was pushed, but quickly regained composure, brushing herself off.


message 32: by Lyric (new)

Lyric Mermaidan (ambrosiadaughterofzeus) | 2204 comments Thea walked to her"Are you ok?"


message 33: by RedPath (new)

RedPath She nodded at Thea, "Yes. But I'm not worried about me." She said, looking at the direction that Rose was dragged.


message 34: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He smiled back. "Are you following me?"

Rose gasped and was pulled into the back room.


message 35: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He smiled. "Extremely independent my lady. But that doesn't me you can't try to find me again."

He took out the belt and started whipping her bare back.


message 36: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He sighed. "I see, so if you hadn't been walking back this way, you wouldn't have wanted to see me?"

The man paused momentarily and looked at Anthony. "Sorry Sir, but you don't have to worry this wench wont do this again." He promised. "I'll make sure of it."


message 37: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He nodded. "So, you wanna go back inside with me?"

He nodded. "My apologies Sir. I'll take my work elsewhere." He said and covered her back again before pulling her up to her feet.

((gtg, be back in an hour or so))


message 38: by RedPath (new)

RedPath Erica stared at Anthony, wondering what on Earth made such a highly placed man like him act so...........human.


message 39: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He smiled and took her head. "It'll be my pleasure to escourt you."

The man nodded. "Yes, but i can't afford to let the servants make mistakes. If they make mistakes to many times, they're worthless."





message 40: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He nodded and started walking with her. "So Lady Elizabeth, did you meet anyone you like this evening?"

The man frowned. "The what do you sugest i do Sir
?"


message 41: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet "Oh..." He frowned slightly. "I see."

"Thats what i said i was going to do!" The man shouted, not careing about respect any more.


message 42: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He looked away. "No, i'm sure the person you met tonight must of been nice." He sighed, she had already met someone.

"Fine." He hissed and turned around. "Get moving Rose." He pushed her forward and they walked to the bck door.


message 43: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet She looked at her for a second. "Whats so funny?"

He laughed at that. "No, i own her, so she isn't welcome to stay anywhere unless i say."


message 44: by RedPath (new)

RedPath Erica watched all this happen with a grim, knowing look on her face. This couldn't be helped. Rose's master wouldn't free her for anything short of a fortune.


message 45: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He blinked. "Um...i'm so my lady, but i'm confused."

He smirked. "don't look so sullen, shes just a girl." He laughed and pushed her out the door. He got on the horse. "Your walking tonight Rose. 72th courtyard." He told her the adress and she nodded, then ho took off on the horse and she started walking.


message 46: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet "Oh!" He smiled. "So you were talking about me."

((lmao, he punched a wall))
Rose looked at the numbers on the houses, trying to figure out where 72 courtyard was.


message 47: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He laughed. "Couldn't you have said that at the beginning?"

((wow, your cousin sounds smart:P))

Rose froze for a second, she heard someone yell.


message 48: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet ((lmao, same))

He smiled. "obviously not."

She heard the sound of someone in pain again and hesitantly started walking back to the ball to see what had happened.


message 49: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet "I'm glad you told me."

Rose walked back in through the back door and saw Anthony holding his hand. "Sir? Are you okay?"


message 50: by Scarlet (new)

Scarlet He smiled back and took her hand again as they walk back in and he froze. "Um...th place is a mess."

She shok her head. "If you don't mind me asking Sir, was it you who just yelled in pain and sounded like a wolf."


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