Thoughts on the World discussion

haha! omg, oakwar i luv it! the last line is so funny and unexpected. awesome job :D

that is so pure
and i can totally picture it
it's such a pretty poem
does it really depict your feelings? or is it suppoesed to be like a narrative poem?
you should become a poet, you know? I have hard times writing poems, but i love writing fiction :)
so good job to you

thats so cool. i have to write this character poem for school on Beowulf but i suck at poems. so far, my poem is:

Beowulf, the beehunter
so short, bad eyes, bad teeth.
brave to stand up
to fight against grendel
and tear off his arm...

yeah, not so poetic eh?

I never read Beowulf, but that sounds like those epic poems :)
ahhh, that explains why i can kind of relate to all that...same here, like a bunch of my friends back in the day were so close to me and it just got kinda weird
I don't really like those big brand things, so when i see that, i'm always like...dude there are so much better things to do with the extra money, y'know?
but my friends are more like...they get popular and ditch the old friends and get boyfriends, and it annoys the heck out of me.

wow, oakwar. pessimistic much? lol. maybe you should think of it as another person who can help to FIX global warming.

but you don't know for sure...

haha, very true, oakwar
well, look at the world brigid...like at the most there is 10% of people even trying to help
and take a look at the trash cans, all recyclable items are dumped in there
so although there is a chance, its only a slight possibility

srry, just trying to be optimistic. :D
anyway, since this discussion is supposed to be about feedback... lol. could some people read my writing? i'm constantly updating soul stealer, but i'm trying to decide whether i should be updating some of my other stories like Destiny and The Chosen One, which not too many people have shown interest in. if you like them, let me know, cuz i want to know whether i should bother posting more or not... here's a link:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...

You should keep updating the chosen one for sure! It is really good!

Oh, and I have some poems. There is one or two in there that sound like they are written from a guy's perspective, and that's because they are part of a story I am writing. But then again, most of my poems don't really reflect what I feel and expirience. The words just demand to be written.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/8...

Oh, and I also have some other writing (a couple short stories, the begining to a novel or two) on this site.

That was good...a bit confusing but every good poem is the first time you read it! I have some poems too! And other stories! Would love feedback. Here's the link to all my writing:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/6...

new soul stealer just posted! :D

omg i loved it!!!!!!!!!!! i read it cuz sella read it so it showed up on my updates and its really good!

BTW, Sella's The Morte is gooood!

oh yeah i read that too it is really good!

yaaay!!! i luv the morte!!! (oh and btw, thanx katie. glad you liked it. ;D)