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message 1: by D.C. (new)

Mar 28, 2010 05:30PM

D.C. | 4 comments

I already posted it on Poetry but I need some more.

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message 2: by Xandy *Mako's Scarf* (new)

Dec 27, 2010 09:00AM

Xandy *Mako's Scarf* (ninjastealthmaster)

Very nice. It's interesting and I like your use of quotations. The last two lines especially are my favorite.

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