The Awesome Group of Awesomeness discussion

Here we can make a group story. Just build on what's written:

Tears streamed down Carly's face as she looked down at her dog laying on her porch. In front of her dog was a man, with him was a gun. She knew the man, but she never thought that he would ever be part of her life again. Now he had taken her closest friend in the world.

She restrained herself from snatching that gun from him and pointing it to his head. How coule he betray me like this? she managed to think.

It all started when they were freshmen. He was the big guy on campus, and Carly was a well... outsider. They got close thanks to a project and her popularity skyrocketed. But he started to change in ways unimaginable.

He became a dork. A nerd. a geek. Carly had been so happy. They could be together. No kid would laugh at her for going for a popular kid. But then she found out that he was using his new interests in poor ways. He could communicate so well that he could make easy deals off of dealers. He could cheat people out of money. Thankfully, Carly tested into a private school. She still remembered the last words she ever spoke to him.

"I'm going to Red sky," she said.

"Oh..."

"I've noticed you have changed in ways I do not like."

"I'm sorry."

"Sorry isn't enough! I want you to change back!"

"I will."

"You will be good."

"I promise."

However, that promise was never meant to be kept. She was wandering around his favorite store, the one where she knew he could steal the most money. Hoping to catch a glimpse of him, those words he had said flashed back into her mind. Could she trust her only friend?

Now as she looked at him, he had definitely changed. Glasses replaced by icy blue contacts, sandals replaced by Vans, trousers by those baggy jeans she hated. His hair fell a little bit over his eye, so unlike the times when he combed it back carefully with gel and whatnot. She decided that he had probably changed for the worse.
He looked up from her dead dog and mouthed the words, "I'm sorry," before thrusting the gun on the ground and walking off, his stride a little less confident than before.

It took all of my strength not to grab the gun and aim it at his head. Instead, I stormed into the house and dialed 9-1-1.

"Hello? A man just shot my dog!" she said into the phone. Then she realized that her cell phone was dead. "Oh, darn! I must have forgotten to plug it in." she said as she was talking to herself. She walked quickly into the kitchen where her house phone was hanging up on the wall. She picked it up and dialed 9-1-1 for the second time. "Hello? Is anyone there?" Her house phone was dead too! that's just a little creepy....

man, i wish my parents were here! She went to make sure the house phone was plugged in. When she got to the outlet, she saw that the cord had either been cut or it had broken on its own.

suddenly she saw a figure moving out of the corner of her eye. She went to turn around as a hand hit her across the back of her head, knocking her out cold. The last thing she heard as she fell to the floor was, "I'm sorry... so very, very sorry."

She woke up in a small but clean room. A shelf was along the other side and there was a television and sofa on the opposite wall. Staring down at her was the guy. Who had shot her dog.
She got up and scowled at him. "What do you want?! Why did you kidnap me? Let me outta here, NOW!"
He looked sorrowful, but that expression was replaced by a cold mask. "I can't."
"Why not?!"
"...It's...not in my power to do so."
"I don't care, just let me out!" She was furious.
"I told you, I can't."

Carly was extremly upset.

"Why are you doing this!?" She asked.

"I well..."

"Well what?"

"I was forced to do it."

She was furious. "By whom!?"

"That's classified," he answered.

"You're a fool," carly spat, "Go away. I never want to see you again!"

Carly tried to move, she wanted to get away from this hell, but then she realized that she couldn't move ; her body wasn't in her control, she couldn't even bend a fingure . She had obviously been injected with a drug...now she could understand how helpless she was...
" Why?? " she cried hopelessly.

"I'm so sorry" he said, "please don't make me tell you,don't Carly, don't ..."

"Why are you always hiding stuff from me?" she glared, her eyes shooting out poison daggers. He flinched and shook his head. "It's complicated, okay? And I can't tell you, no matter how much I want to!"
"That's a great help," she muttered, scowling.

"Carly..." he leaned forward.

"Shut up!" Carly yelled back, "If you really wanted to help me, you would tell me what's up and why you killed my dog!"

Carly was discusted. "Go away! I hate you!" She tried to get up but was bound to her seat. "Untie me now !!!!"

"I am sorry bu-"

"I don't want to hear your buts! UNTIE ME!!

"I can't!!"

"If you really cared you could!" Carly screamed back.

"But you don't understand I can-"

"Stop telling me you can't! just do it!!!!!!!!!"

"suppose I untie you, can you move then?? stop shouting at me like that! you can't move Carly!!"

"Why not!" Carly was distrest. "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME!!!" She shouted.

"you've been drugged!" he yelled."can't you feel that?" "juss try!can you even move a finger?"

((??))

" A little," was all Carly said.

(( is there a name for the boy or man))

((??))

(( i s'ppose not! he is just a "he"))

(( oh, okay))

((well...lets continue with the story!would you?))

Carly fell silent, shooting him lares every time she got the chance. He started to pace back and forth, talking to himself rapidly. It must've been hours until somebody suddenly knocked on the wooden door.

Jack stood still ,stoped talking. He was badly shocked who is it ? he thought. It wasn't planned, nobody was meant to come .

Carly was scarde. Hopefully this isn't an other poser! She thought angerly. I hate you Jake!!!

(( oh he has a name now ))

Jake stared at the door puzzled by the unfamiliar event. "Oh might as well," he thought. He twirled his gun in his hand and walked to the door straining to hear words he could not understand.

Carly glared. "What the heck are you doing?!" she spat. Jake turned around, his eyes panicky and said, "Shh. Its not anyone from the company..."
"What company?!"
"Shut. Up."
"Why?"
He shook his head, frustrated. "Trust me."
She opened her mouth, but closed it. "That's kinda hard to do at the moment," she muttered.

Casey thought to herself,"What the heck am I doing?! Why should I trust him anymore?! He lied, betrayed, and took my whole world away!!! What reason is there to trust him anymore?!" She sighed as a tear trickled down her face. "Because he's a friend to me......a friend.... OR WAS!!! I don't Know what to do.... help me Jake come back...."

Jake opened the door a crack, hoping Casey would keep quiet. He glanced back at her as she scowled at him.

Now that there's no one from the company Jack says,shall I scream?Shall I cry for help?why should I shut up?how can I trust Jack? He kidnapped me!What if there's a cop by the door?He can help me then...Carly thought...

"Open up," a low voice growled from outside. Jake quickly obliged to do so. Carly narrowed her eyes as a dangerous looking guy and a super skinny woman entered the room. They both had sunglasses.

"Who are you?" Carly asked in more of a yell than an in door voice. Jake glared at her and pretended to punch her by aiming well and seemingly hit her hard. It didn't hurt Carly one bit.

"Who is she?" Carly asked pointing to the woman.

"Shut up!" Jake yelled at Carly and this time actually hit her. Pain shot up Carly's arm.

Carly set her jaw, frustrated, ignoring the tears of pain that managed to seep out. Jake looked back at her apologetically.
The woman began to speak. She had a slight accent. "We are here to inspect the premises of this building."

"What does it have to do wuth me?????"she yelled angrily...

"Shut up," Jake said coldly, and the two people laughed. "She's a little slow," the man commented, his voice rumbling.

" ah ... and you're insane"Carly added.

"That's classified," the man smirked and walked around the room. I started to feel my arms again. I struggled free and sat up.

"I don't really give ****!" I yelled, "Now tell me what's going on!"

"You know," the woman said snidely to Jake, "you should've tried to do a better job of keeping her quiet." Jake nodded, shooting a look at Carly that made her waver a little.
"Who the h3ll are you?" she shrieked angrily. She didn't notice that the man had come behind me. He raised a heavy hand and brought it down on her head and she collapsed on the ground.

Jake's eye's widened and me managed to squeak out,"Carly..."

The woman glanced at the man,"Looks like we ended up having to do the guy's job FOR him."

The man slowly walked up to Jake, smirking,"Well, well. Looks like you're gonna lose this months pay check." He laughed.

Shocked Jake nodded, looking down ,"Sorry." He said between clenched teeth.

Jack layed on the ground uncouniess he woke up hours later to find blood on the groud but it wasn't his own carly was gone and so was jake and this thin lady. No trace of anyone. was he dreaming had he just fallen because of one of his seziers? did he forget to take it and hit his head? Was he losing his mind? but if he had a sezier why was everything in place no sighn of any movement other than him being on the floor.
Did he drink to much last night he walked slowly to his refreigerator was there someone else there no one no nosie no shadow no open windows what going on here. All the beer was in the fridge as he had left it.
he counted his pills he did remember to take them. He scracthed his head like he did when he was trying to make sence of things.
Later a light tap at the door........

(( WAIT WAIT so the guy's name is Jack the man's name is Jake, the skinny woman has no name and the girl's name is Carly right??? ))

((Correct!))