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message 1: by Amena (last edited Jun 23, 2010 06:41AM) (new)

Amena Khan (amenakhan) | 24 comments You blew out half of the stars in the sky
You ripped down all four of the walls that held me
It makes me afraid and lonely
I am consumed by thought of you though and they make me blind from the rest of the world
These thoughts are dangerous

This is a baby poem, teensy tiny. It reminded me of Hush, Hush and numerous other novels with romance in them. I don't know I was looking at the reviews and I was like hey I got something for this. YOu know the girl is completely in love with a guy and she can't get him off her mind, but she knows that he's no good for her, ahem Patch, Edward Cullen, and others I can't remember the names of.
Tell me what you guys think if you please. I need feedback!!


message 2: by Kate (last edited Jun 23, 2010 10:24AM) (new)

Kate (katemreads) | 197 comments Mod
Amena I really love this poem too! I know I've probably told you this before but I'm not a huge poetry fan but I LOVE yours! Another great poem by Amena!


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Amena Khan (amenakhan) | 24 comments thank you!


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