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Tanglepaw(will be Tangleclaw) gazed at the silverpelt sitting next to her mentor, Flashflood.
"the stars amaze me!" Tanglepaw said. Flashflood laughed. and he walked off to teh warriors den. TAnglepaw watched the stars for a long time. they seemed to form other figures and messages. Tanglepaw was confused

(sorry, never heard of it)

((Lol, I find that funny, because in one of the roleplays I'm in, I have a character called Flashflood, and it's a she-cat in StarClan who is very forgetful.))

(i thougt of flashflood after a rainstorm... but flashflood is a blue tom)
tanlglepaw was exausted from that day's training. she retired to the apprentices den.
"hey Tanglepaw!" brokenpaw(later to become Brokenheart) meowed, "your warrior name should be tanglednightowl!" Tanglepaw and Brokenpaw laughed. Tanglepaw was a night owl.. liking 2 stay up late... all the other apprentices in the en, Nightpaw(later to become Nightshadows), Stormpaw (stormcloud) and Silentpaw(silentnight) hissed at them to be quiet. Tanglepaw went to sleep

(I should lend you the first book Kenzie)

((Alrighty.))

((now lets continue))

(okay! where?)

Tanglepaw woke up with brokenpaw poking her with his paw. "Hey sleepyhead,it's time for training!"

Tanglepaw wearily got up and stretched her limbs. She padded over to the fresh-kill pile and started munching on a mouse. She looked around her beautiful camp, with small dapples of sunshine all over the ground. Tall weeping willow trees made canopies and shadowed the camp beautifully. Tanglepaw let out a purr so loud that she almost didn't hear brokenpaw call, "It's time for training!"

Tanglepaw leap to her feet and pounced on Flashflood.
"hey!" he cried out,"stop fooling around!!!"
tanglepaw sat back down and watched a fat vole thrash in brambles near the training site. Flashflood was explaining something but Tanglepaw was distracted by the prey. she scooted closer and then pounced on the vole.
"Tanglepaw!" all the mentor groaned.
((what clan are they in???? i'd like it to be riverclan))

((Yeah!!! RiverClan all the way!!))

"What?" Tanglepaw asked Flashflood with a bit of frustration. "I just caught a vole, and you don't even congratulate me?"

"we were trying to explain the rules of fishing!!!!" Flashflood sighed. He demonstrated by reaching into the stream and pulling out a silverly fish.
"wow!!!!" tanglepaw gasped, "can i try?"

((are they in the old forest or at the lake????))

((the lake))

Flashflood smiled. "Go for it."
Tanglepaw stared at the water for a very long time. Finally a ripple went through the surface...Tanglepaw flashed out his paw, but with a splash he missed, and the fish dived back into the water.
"Mouse dung!" He hissed.