The FAYZ: The Gone Series discussion
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The Actual End
WOAH. THAT ROCKS!!!!Seriously, I could picture it perfectly in my head.
Also yeah, I hope that MG doesn't just end the series with the Fayz ending. I'd like to know what happens after. And frankly, not just a quick epilogue either. A full on, maybe extra book or whatever. At least a few chapters.
Anyway, that was really cool. Good job. :)
Thanks, it just came to me. Honestly? I'd like to see another (shorter) series after the FAYZ that follows what becomes of the character. Or heck, maybe even just one book. It can be set one year after the end of the FAYZ and show what happened....and then I want all the main characters to sneak away from home, meet up, and come back to the abandoned Perdido Beach one last time. I can't imagine anyone living there after what happened, I figure they'd bulldozed what's left of the it and close it off...radioactivity and all.
Anyway, They shouldn't actually go IN the city, but just stand on the cliff, just behind where the barrier use to be, not saying anything. Diana, her hair grown back, Sam, Astrid, Edilio, (Dekka, if she lives.)
Then Astrid say "It's really over." There's a moment of silence as Sam, looks dispassionately at the ground. Then abruptly he dares to step over the line where the barrier use to be, taking a few steps forward. He stands on the soil that was his prison for two years. A few moments pass in utter silence, before Sam turns back and exits the ruins of the FAYZ for the last time. As the sun breaks the horizon he says, "Yes. It is." Then he takes Astrid's hand and walks off, the group following (Diana hesitating, casting one last look at the spot Caine died before she too follows) leaving the past behind.
THE END.
((I figured they'd need closure. Especially Diana.))
I'm sorry, but at the moment I don't have the patience to read all that now. I will when I have a greater attention span.
*rolls eyes* Very well. (How any of you manage to read full length novels I'll never know.) lol.
I READ IT!!! OMG!!!!!!!But I'm still not sure I like the idea of Caine being dead. :(
I READ IT!That would be SO INTENSE! But yeah, the dead Caine AND Dekka makes me sad :[
Idk. I just can't think of him existing in the real world. He's too dangerous and power hungry/crazy. Plus, with his powers? He'd kill a lot of people. Even if he survived, I can't imagine him staying out of trouble for long.
Nope, the GP blows up the nuclear plant. they all die.the end.
You have such a lovely 
Nope, The end is where we all become characters in the Fayz who were hiding the whole time. Then we come out of hiding and everyone dies because they can't stand how
Even the wall can't stand it. It dissapears and al the adults come running and they're like "Wait! Who the hell are these kids?"
*bows* why thank you, Six. i try my best.
and i second Grace's opinion.
Woah. That was a lot to read. I can't believe caine died. = (
Magnum the Awesome Master wrote: "*bows* why thank you, Six. i try my best."I know dear, I know. *pats Dan's head fondly*
Lol to Grace's idea.
Yiling Aka Karma wrote: "Woah. That was a lot to read. I can't believe caine died. = ("
Yes, I'm evil aren't I?
I like Grace's idea.Our parents would be like "How the hell did they get in there????"
it would be sooooo funny!I would so totally do a Magnum and collect all the guns i could find!
Then shoot stuff. *pew pew pew*
Q!K
Lunabell *Amethyst Lunallia Brakenstach-Kofski XI wrote: "I like Grace's idea.Our parents would be like "How the hell did they get in there????""
They'd be like "wait! they told me they were sleeping over a friends house, not getting trapped in a bubble for a year(or how ever long they Fayz is gonna last). They're so grounded when they get home!"
Exactly!Wait. Sleeping over at a friends house for a year?
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You sure have carefree parents Grace.
Does anyone else have an actual way they want the story to end? Do you have any preference for who kills the GP, or if Caine dies, then how? And if he lives, where do you think he'll be sent?You know what I wanna know? Whether or not people on the outside know what's going on inside. I'm kind of hoping so, just for the sake of the character mental sake. I mean, how would you explain "What happened in there?" to an outsider.
I wonder if the kids will be granted amnesty, or tried. Probably amnesty since 1) they can't expect people to be lawful in a situation like that (i.e. starvation, powers, no adults, est.) 2) that they're kids, 2) and the situation is unprecedented.
The situation is DEFINITELY unprecedented.I really wonder what happens to the kids who Poof.
Well I don't think it can be good, seeing as a monster type thing is trying to lure them there.I don't know how i want it to end.
I guess i want someone that no one expected to step up and do something, or something crazy to happen.
But i'm not sure what.
I want something totally unexpected to happen.I can't guess about what that would be, otherwise it won't be unexpected.
Unless my guess was that gigantic versions of the Teletubbies come from Heaven and eat everyone. Then no matter how many times I guess that, it would still be unexpected.
...I will be pissed if this all turns out to be a dream, or a fantasy/mass delusion in or caused by Little Pete's mind. Like, I will hunt down MG and make him to a recall/re-write of all the books.
Yay! I like the right side... heheehhehehe
I'm left handed, so I have a preference for the left actually.
I'm not left handed... it's rather retarded, in fact!
*cough and glares*
Leftie here.
Leftie here.
Here is how it would end if Magnum Blue was in the fayz:Magnum Had been one of Sam's closest friends and was one of the only ones Sam had told about the true Origins of the Fayz wall. Little Pete had created it.
"Fuck this" said Magnum, and shot Little Pete in the Head.(Continues into Six's first Idea)
yeah, but he caused it.
Sure... but it's not like he MEANT to :[
And then what if it didn't go away? You'd be screwed
I just have a feeling that Pete's going to have to die for the FAYZ to come down. But, since he's containing the GP, he can't until the GP is dead. So I just came up with the "Pete causes GP's death, causing his own death" scenario.
That'd be crazy, and it hurts my brain to think about.
Agent Six wrote: "I just have a feeling that Pete's going to have to die for the FAYZ to come down. But, since he's containing the GP, he can't until the GP is dead. So I just came up with the "Pete causes GP's deat..."Yup. Most likely.
I have this slight notion of a feeling that LP's gonna die and Astrid's gonna end up getting herself killed. But nah, idk.
The great, final battle ends, the children of the FAYZ (so very few left after the violence, starvation, the plague) gather on the cliff that over looks Perdido beach. Sam, all the freaks, even the kids from Coates,--(and alliance out of sheer necessity, there's so few left)--are there, battered and bleeding.
The Gaiaphage collapses in it's mine, green-spark crystals fading, their glow dying out. On the cliff of Hilltop, right next to the barrier Pete's dies, breathing stops as he lays limply in Astrid's lap, wide blues eyes open and unseeing. In the end, it was Pete who had pushed the GP over the edge, but it'd killed him in the process.
The kids watch at the FAYZ flickers, and then abruptly disappears. There's a sudden rush of sound and sight, over running the kid's already overloaded senses. They see the outside for the first time in almost two years.
A large crowd stands crowded along a barrier that not longer exists. They look foreign to the children--they haven't seen anyone healthy in such a long, long time. Even the worst, most haggard people in the crowd look ten times better than the starving, half dead kids.
There's a sudden pause, a gasp, and then the crowd surges forward. Numbly, the kids stand. Suddenly, some of them realize they recognize a few of the faces. People from the town, from before the poof, before the FAYZ and the blood, and nightmares started.
Near by, Sam collapses to his knees. (Over, over, it's over, over....) Edilio stands near him, slips a hand on Sam's shoulder, the only comfort he can offer. He misses Dekka, who had become his friend--(killed in the Plague)--who was stronger than most he knew. Astrid doesn't move, sobbing over her bother's body, too gone to know what's going on.
A little way off Diana stars silently into the still face of Caine. Killed as the battle ended--the last one to die by the GP--his head sits cradled in her lap. She ignores the crowd swarming around her. (No, no, no, no, no--I didn't tell you, I didn't even tell you, I never got the chance, I hate you, I love you, you bastard, you bastard come back, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, please!) It doesn't matter. Nothing matters...anymore.
(End-ish...I just didn't write anymore...this is a lot longer than I planned).
That's just a rough idea. I REALLY, REALLY want to explore what happens AFTER the kids are removed by the parents. I think Diana (and a lot of kids) would go to an Asylum. I think Sam and Astrid would refuse to be seperated. I think a lot of the kids (and their family) would live in government monitored gated communities. After all, you can't have mutants running around without surveillance..... Wow...I'm really tempted to write this to perfection now.Hell, I'm tempted to write a series....