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"Be careful with the Nabints." A scientist cautioned a helping student. The boy steadily carried the tank full of tiny machines to the counter. "What are these things going to be used for anyway?" The student asked.

(I'm kinda lonely right now... *sigh* I'll continue for a minute.)
"Nothing for nosy pupils." The scientist retorted the boy started to protest but remained quiet at a look from his superior. "Alright, well while your here. I can at least tell you what properties are in these little fellas." The Scientist said. "A Nabint is a new and improved type of nanobot, only they each have completely different jobs but work for the same purpose in their mind which is set into our company's base computer." The boy was listening eagerly the whole time, taking in as much as his mind could hold. "What's their main purpose?" He asked. "Right, now. To save the life of a human, to rebuild and improve." The scientist explained turning to a microscope with a slide in hand. "But it is most important for one not to come into contact with them yet. This is the first experiment on a human and we don't want to mess this up." The scientist explained.

the boy took the lid off the jar and began to pour them into a testube. but one landed on his skin, he shook it off hoping the proffesors would not notice

But it wouldn't slide off . . .

it dug into his skin....

Then he began to scream

he fell to the floor his vision going black

(now or no?)

he suddenly had an impulse to step out of his hospital bed and go hit the doctor, but as he raised his fist he stopped himself, 'why am i feeling violent' he shook his head and lay back down

(like the host. hee hee, how are we going to get that out of our minds.)
What had happened?
He had totally blanked out . . .

Jyke felt a pain in his arm, he glanced over it to see a small andrint embedded deeply in his arm. A scientist came in just then. "I'm so sorry Jyke. I shouldn't have had you handle the andrints." He apologized. Jyke looked up at the doctor. "What's going to happen to me?" He asked. The scientist didn't answer.

"Tell me!"
The scientist muttered under his breath, "Because the Andrite latched onto you, you were the test."

"what test?!" he screamed

"The test to see if they worked."
"But what about the other guy?"
"He got off the hook, it latched onto you faster."

"r u kidding?! the whole class was just a hoax?!"

"yes."

he tried to get up but he was strapped down

Jyke started to feel rising panic. "You can't do this to me! I never wanted to be this!" He yelled. He felt his ears start to ring, his head ached and he felt the pain spread throughout his whole body.

He struggled and then the last thing that he saw was someone bending over him doing who-knows-what.

jyke woke up groggily. Feeling his headache ready to split his head. He raised his hand to rub his eyes. When he raised his arm though, it didn't feel like his own. 'what? that doesn't make sense.' Jyke thought.

((It's a mix of the Host and Maximum Ride. ^v^))

he felt like he was watching himself from outside his body

The Andrint delved deeper into his skin until it was completely hidden from view. Jyke screamed in pain.

"Whats happening to me??!?!" he yelped in panic.

He felt the andrint start to move up his arm, near the back of his neck.

He screamed again, trying to resist its maddening pull, and failed miserably.

He felt it delve in his brain. knowledge and every scrap of information was shoved into his brain.

he shut his eyes tight in defeat.

Jyke felt himself black out for what seemed like hours. When he woke he found himself looking through different eyes... they were more enhanced! He could see every possible detail, every cell on an organism in the room.

"what happened to me?" he said to no one in particular.

He felt an answer pop up in his mind. He was tested, he has an andrint in his body, now a million, and he's still stuck to a test table.

the only answer he didnt seem to have was how to get out.

As if it were always there. The answer popped up in his head. I have a lead coating over my muscles, making me as strong as an army, all I have to do is break through these straps.

and that is exactly what he did, or tried to do.

Someone had obviously changed the straps from simple leather to iron. I can't break through this! Jyke thought panicked.

now what am i going to do? he thought just as a person he thought he recognized sauntered into the room, mock applauding him. "That was really quite an impressive try, i must say. Too bad it didnt work."

"Who are you?" Thomas asked. He didn't look like the scientist before.

"That is not of your concern."

"What do you mean it's none of my concern?! I'm being held captive and tested like some animal!!" Jyke yelled.

"And you'll find out all in due time, i assure you."

Jyke glared at the man. "At least tell me what you're going to do to me."

"That is for me to know and you to find out." he said evasively. He gestured to his hand at something Jyke could not see.

(uh... you weren't very far, you can just quickly read through.)

"What is it?" He moaned, he had a throbbing headache now.

"he felt terrible but enpowered at the same time

(wait enpowered?whats that mean i sound like a little kid)(how about..)
slowly he raised his head after the headache cooled. he saw thomas at the other side of the room frozen with fear in his eyes. slowly thomas crept backwords toward the door. instantly jyke moved forward. suprised that he was able to move but he snapped back in to focus. thomas had opened the door. in one second jyke was on top of thomas and then out the door in to a wide white hallway. bright lights blinding him.

he ran to the door a wild grin on his face

(whoa!!! who is thomas? How'd he get there? :O )

(no clue i just added really)

(? :o Now I'm really confused...)