Creative Writing discussion

so since we kinda all got serois stories, i put a kinda funny one up, im trying to go for unpridicable, irony, and funny but not stuipid funny.

umm i just kinda wanted to say this, so it might make more sense

Cas: more main character, powerful, smart, unpredicable, get along very well with Ash, ignores Zoey most of the time, great at flying, and shooting star surfing

Ash: smart, cant stand Zoey, loves flying with Cas, and shooting star surfing.

Zoey: Annoying, a girly girl, loves pink and purple, and think Ash is awesome, but doesnt like the way that him and Cas always do the unpridicable and get out alive

Z: quiet, smart, hangs out more with Zoey, but secretly wants to kill her.

FIRST PERSON ROTATION!?!?!?! This story is going to be SOOOOOOOOO Awesome! but it is going to be hard. I will try to comment on it and not mess it up too bad.

And p.s. you might want to re-read your fist post. there are a lot of typos.

oh my goodness. john, your post made me giggle. a lot.

i just reread it. It made me smile. But thank you. I try.

seriously, i was laughing for like five minutes! it was awesome

thanks. I plan on writing a full book devoted to jokes and crap like that.

Like this girl is on a bike ride with friends and a the driver honks at her and she calls the driver a B1tch, and it turns out to be her mom with the window rolled down.

It's just an idea for giggles and of course would be put in with more detail.

lol! you should post some stuff like that on here

yes!! so Cas and ash always get out, and sometimes with z, but Zoey always gets the worst part

sorry about my typos english is not my best.... I lll try and fix some.

the one that confused me the worst was that one where it described Zoey. "An annoying Yani" is what you said. I figure its supposed to be yanki

no, its an alian race, uhh my goal with this story was for it to make perfect sense and no sense at all. And to be crazy and funny, but seems normal... does that make sense?

yes. and so far your goal is working.

yea!

so do we just write in blocks of one person's point of view?

Uhhh. *Shruggs*

:P

lol

rawr. nobody posts anymore!

sorry.

i'll start posting again

XD

XP

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thats enough of that

:*(

yes you just post for whoever you'd like, just not as the same person before you and dont leave out one charrie, and its only Zoey, Cas, Ash, and Z

so the 4? not the others?



ok

yep!

DA your post was awesome!!!

thanks, but it wasn't that good

yeah it was! it was great! you really got zoey!

can you explain how the stars, mentioned in the story, work?

Because usually starts burn flesh if you get within 3 trillion feet from it.

yeah...well it is a sci- fi

So this is how they work,they stand on a shooting star and there are differnt types, like ones full of goo, and stuff, and they surf on them. They have to dodge out of the way and if they fall the gravity from the star pushed them down, so there freefalling. Before the stars burn up they have to finish there practice and get back to the ship. Or jump oon another star. They can mulipulate the energy to do almost anything, so be creative!

AWESOME! thanks!