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Welcome! for all that don't know, i am writing a book called the Secrets of Faith, this is the beginning so far:
For all of you people who are squmish about things like extreme , unforgiving lives that belong to your not so ordinary 13 year old kids like fierce battles powers beyond comprehension, the constant fear of being caught and treated like lab rats, lies and betrayal, and always being on the on the move than this isn’t your book. But if you like that kinda stuff than this is your book. Just be careful, there are some things that should remain hidden in the many secrets of Aya Faith.

this is just the section of the book on the back or on the inside cover, so what do you think?

I'm thinking of starting a Star Wars fanfic called Hard Princess, about a girl (Melian) whose parents are Jedis (her mother was a secret). They escaped to an unknown planet and started a family. Then Melian's father (Caswi) leaves, but she stows away in his ship. She falls off in Naboo, where she meets the one, the only, Obi-Wan Kenobi. (Not sure if I want to make it the old or young version. Probably young.)

thats a great idea! you should write that!!!

Cool. Good to have positive feedback. My friends think I'm insane and obsessed with Star Wars - and they are probably right. :)

And your idea is awesome as awesome can get!! I love it!!

star wars is a popular interest, so your not insane, your just passionate. and my idea isn't very good... your just saying that.....

by the way, change the names and descriptions a bit so you wont get sued for copy right. like naboo would be, i don't know, wong tong.

I think that you are allowed to use those as long as you say that the original idea was George Lucas'. Like, I saw a book online for download that was about James Potter. As long as I include the name of the creator of the original idea, I should be fine.

okay, i was just saying. so have you started writing yet?

I have ... in my head. I'm still debating over a couple things. I have other projects going on too. The fanfic was the most recent.

oh, well, you have a great concept!

Thanks! You do too! I can't wait to see more of yours!

How's your writing going?

slow. i keep getting stuck on the little details. but i'm getting their.

Awesome! I was just making cover pages with Picnik. My lil sis likes to approve them. :)

I felt this weird longing to write poetry a couple nights ago when I watched Black Hawk Down so I made up a book of poetry. About war. It was a little weird at first and then I got into it.

cool! do you think you could post some of your poetry? i really'd like to see some.

It's in my writing. Here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

wow. your awesome, Frankie

Thanx. JD, you're awesome too.

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I'm feeling oddly happy today.

no i'm not. i'll never be able to write poetry like you!

Poetry is easy. Find a subject that means something to you and just think until you're about to explode. Then words form themselves in front of you. :)

What music are you listening to?

well, i was watching TV and evacuate the dance floor comes on so i wanted to listen to it again. i think i played it 7-9 times in a row, then teenage dream, dynamite, then tell me something i don't know, and lastly i'm still here.

I'm listening to my Pandora, which consists of: Augustana, A Fine Frenzy, Regina Spektor, Erin McCarley, Rachel Diggs, and a lot of indie rock/pop.

Hmmm...Good songs!

Yeah, you know it! :) And a little Jimmy Eat World

I haven't heard that one yet...

Really? Their best is The Middle. YouTube it, or something.

Sure, I'm intrigued now...

You saw it? A person at my school called it gay - which I hate. I hate when people do that. ANYWAY, I'm getting off track.

then they are gay.I agree with you.

What?! A person called them gay - I totally disagree!

Anyway, let's get off that subject. I totally just realized that if I am going to do a Star Wars fanfic, I need to know a lot more about Star Wars than I do already. Like, a lot more. Like you would not imagine. I know nothing!!

Frankie wrote: "What?! A person called them gay - I totally disagree!"

what do you mean?

All I think you need to do is read other fanfics.

A person called them gay, and I told him off. I disagree.

Ohhh. Well good thinking, that's what they deserve, your entitled to your opinions and they shouldn't butt in and tell you off.

Thanks, JD.

No prob, :b! How is life goin' for you?

It's going. Lots of writing, lots of homework, lots of jerks in school, lots of encouraging L.A. teachers ... the usual.

You live in L.A.? Cool! And if I ever met these jerks, I might just accidentally let them have it...*being very sly and sneaky:)*

L.A. is Language Arts. I live in Iowa. :)

Oh, I'm such an idiot. *blushes*. (I promised not to blush on Roleplay Madness) But I stand by my promise in letting those jerks have (both verbal and physical :) ) I don't allow bulling, I know how you feel. I used to be bullied constantly, so I want none of my friends to feel the pain it causes. :b

Have you ever watched Finding Nemo in German?

Well that's random and no I haven't. Why do you ask?

Cos I just watched it in German class.

Oh, that's awesome! I don't take a language at school because French got canceled, but I try to study Japanese in my limited free time!

We get German, French, and Spanish.

lucky...

But on Monday, I go from German to Decisions. Take a guess at what that is.

Writers class?