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message 1: by Amaranta (last edited Oct 24, 2010 07:09AM) (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Full Name: Taylor Marie Evernight

Nickname(s): Tay

Age and/or Birthdate: Fifteen; April thirteenth.

Family: (I can't say anything here, it would give too many things away)

Friends: Mellina Henderson, Reina Winshire, Seraina Telenson

Appearance (description and/or picture): Taylor has golden blond hair that falls just past her shoulders. It is slightly curly(more than wavy, but can't quite be called "curly"). Her eyes are a shade of green-ish blue. She is about 5'6". She has a slightly oval shaped face with a somewhat square jawline. Her nails are torn and jagged most of the time because she bites them. Her teeth are slightly crooked, even though she has had braces. She has a Protector's Mark on her left wrist, in the form of a bracelet made of swirls.
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Personality:

Background: (I can't really put anything here, because it would give away things that are going to happen in the story.)

Role in story: Taylor is the main character and the voice of the story. She is also the main protagonist.


message 2: by Amaranta (last edited Oct 23, 2010 11:40AM) (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Full Name: Ailina Mikata(Pronounced: Me-ka-ta) Andell

Nickname(s): none

Age and/or Birthdate: 26; November 23

Family: Shannon Smith and Endric Andell are her parents. She has a half-brother, Stauros Andell(who will appear later in the story), but she doesn't know/care about him.

Friends: "I don't need, or want, friends. All they do is act annoying and get in my way. They are useless and have no meaning to me."

Appearance: Being a Shape-shifter, Ailina can become anyone or anything. However, her favorite, and most common, form has her with straight, jet black hair that falls between her shoulders and her waist. Her eyes are usually a cat-like green. She tends to be around 6'1" and looks as though she is in her early twenties, sometimes even in her late teens. She usually has a slightly tanned complexion with absolutely no imperfections. Ailina, unlike most Shape-sifters, has no tell, and does not need to see or hear about the person or object she is shifting into, although it helps.

Personality: Evil, sadistic, and insane

Background: Ailina was born to Shannon Smith and Endric Andell. Endric is a Gifted with the ability of Second Sight. Ailina's parents never married, and her mother didn't know about Gifted's or any other species. Ailina lived with her mother and was originally named Erica May Smith. She didn't know she was a Gifted until she was in the third grade. She had commented about wanting blue eyes, and suddenly she had them. Ailina began to research shape-shifting, and started to experiment, teaching herself how to shift.

She originally had a tell; no matter how hard she tried, at least on lock of hair always remained it's original color. Also, she had to have seen the object or person she would shift into. If she was simply changing something about her real appearence (for example: changing her eye color) she also had to see it somewhere else.

She never told anyone about her ability. However, about five monthes after finding out about her ability, her dad came. He explained to her what she was and what all she was capable of. Afterwards, he offered to take her to Cantalier's to expand on her ability. She agreed, also changing her name to what her father wanted to call her. Shortly after she graduated from Cantalier's, she joined the Winsentra clan. They taught her how to use her full potential and eliminate her tell. She still needed to see, or at least hear, about the person or object she shifted into, though.

She worked as a spy, infiltrating, sabotaging, and gaining information about the Creperum. She did so for two years faithfully, then was captured. Impressed by her ability, they gave her the choice to join and increase her power even more. Ailina jumped on the opertunity. To prove her loyalty, she knowingly led most of the Winsentra clan into a trap. She, and many other Creperum members, anilated the once large clan. The few that survived were imprisoned by the Creperum.

Her power continued to increase and soon she no longer needed to even hear about the thing she shifted into. She infiltrates other clans now to "recruit" new members. She was captured in the Tunnels of Aduro a few monthes ago. However, she has "attemped" to escape many times, to "remind" them that she can whenever she wants.

Role in story: Ailina is one of the main antagonists. She is a powerful member of the Creperum, a clan that wants to take over all non-human races, and enslave all humans. She is an extremely powerful Gifted with the ability to Shape-shift.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

This is really cool, why so much detail about one character but not the other?


message 4: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Because, unfortunatly I would end up writing too much about Taylor, and it would ruin the suprises that are yet to come in chapters 10, 11, and 12. If I could tell you I would, also I can't really describe her personality so if you could help me with that I would really apreciate it.


message 5: by C (new)

C Well maybe you could expand on her personality by digging even further into her past. Everyone's past shapes who they are and how they react to certain things. Something mush have happened to her to make her personality what it is.


message 6: by Amaranta (last edited Oct 26, 2010 05:20PM) (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments This is for my NaNo, Exchange.

Full Name: Jemalina Serra(pronounced Sara) Larson

Nickname(s): Jemmy(She goes by this), Jem-Jem, J-J

Age and/or Birthday: 17; October 19

Family: Roy and Clara Larson are her parents. She has two siblings, a younger brother, age 5, named Thadius "Thad" Larson, and a younger sister. age 7, named Dena Cecelia Larson(Often goes by Cecelia or Cece).

Friends: Nell Lena Oneil, Crystal Lawrence, Vito Osborn

Appearance: Jemmy has straight brown hair that falls just before her waist. Her eyes are a pale shade of green that is often confused for gray, when seen at a distance. She stands at about 5' 4". She has a heart-shaped face with a square jawline. She has a faint scar on her left arm that she's had since she was two. She has a birthmark in the shape of a heart on the back of her neck. Her teeth are perfectly straight, and she's never had braces. She has a small diamond stud nose ring that is hardly noticable

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Personality: (Will finish later)

Background: (Will finish later)

Role in story: Jemmy is the protagonist of the story.


message 7: by Amaranta (last edited Oct 25, 2010 05:39PM) (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Thanks. Okay, back to Daydreamer.

Full Name: Mellina Silva Henderson

Nickname(s): Mell

Age and/or Birthdate: Fifteen;

Family: Ventus and Amelia Henderson are her parents, and she has a seven year old sister named Amber.

Friends: Taylor Evernight, Seraina Telenson, Reina Winshire, Ardelia ________, Arlina Manla

Appearance (description and/or picture): Mellina has wavy, chestnut hair, that falls almost halfway between her shoulders and her waist. Her eyes are a deep shade of emerald green. She stands at 5'7". She has a heartshaped face, with a rigid jawline. Being a Woodland Elf, Mellina has all of the common traits of the species, inculding pointed ears. She has a Protector's Mark on her left wrist, in the form of a bracelet made of swirls, looking exactly like Taylor's.
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Personality: Mellina is very serious. She is often sarcastic and acts like a bit of a smart-aleck among her friends. She is incredably loyal to her friends and would die for them.

Background: Mellina was born to Ventus and Amelia Henderson. Both of her parents are Elves, although, Ventus is a Wind Elf and Amelia is a Woodland Elf.

Role in Story: Mellina is a protagonist of the story, although not the main one. She is a Woodland Elf, and Taylor's Protector.(I'll explain that later.)


message 8: by C (new)

C Definitely the left pic. It fits your description of her much better.


message 9: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) LOL, the left pic fits


message 10: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Okay thanks, now which name do you guys like better, Amber or Opal, for her little sister?


message 11: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) I think amber is sweet. Opal sounds kind of evil and cackly, lol


message 12: by Cody (new)

Cody (rolinor) | 81 comments hmm I like opal lol


message 13: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Okay,

Opal: |

Amber: |

Are there any other opinions?


message 14: by C (new)

C Amber


message 15: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Opal: |
Amber: ||


message 16: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) Amber again xP


message 17: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments You already voted


message 18: by Amina (new)

Amina  (journalistam) lol :P


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Amber! It's like FIRE!


message 20: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments That's the point. Amber is supposed to be a Fire Elf. *looks at profile for Mell* Crap *face palm* that was a mistake.

Opal: |
Amber |||


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

You should get a girl with like reddish blond hair.


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

:)


message 23: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Maybe. Probably. She doesn't play a big part in this story(I haven't even mentioned her) but I think she will in a later sequel. I have a question, does that pic for Mell still work, cuz she's supposed to have chestnut hair, not dark brown?


message 24: by Cody (new)

Cody (rolinor) | 81 comments ohh her sister is a fire elf well you didn't say that I change my vote to amber, opal sounds more like water.


message 25: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Opal: :(
Amber:||||

You made Opal sad, Cody.


message 26: by Cody (new)

Cody (rolinor) | 81 comments I'm sorry Opal, make a water elf and name her Opal.


message 27: by Annabelle (new)

Annabelle (mrs-varen-nethers) | 100 comments I have to say Amber. It just fits.


message 28: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Opal: :'(
Amber: |||||

Okay, Opal is really upset, I'm gonna stop now. Amber wins.

Amber: :D


message 29: by Annabelle (new)

Annabelle (mrs-varen-nethers) | 100 comments Poor Opal. But Amber is better somehow in this case. (:


message 30: by Amaranta (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 125 comments Thanks.


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