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message 1: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Hehehehehe....nice....I can try to see what I can do Tate....but all in all...who exactly are you?


message 2: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Cool.....I am writing a few stories myself....though unlike you I don't have the ability or patience to finish it ((I'm too much a perfectionist)) but I plan on getting some books together. I would be interested in reading your story....but here's a question....can you read what I have written? I would like to know what opinions people have about my writing. I am very bad with punctuation and grammar but all in all I'm not too bad if you are interested. ;D Up to you though.


message 3: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
You're right, Tate. Jamie is an awesome writer. I've read some of her stuff. (Not all, I'm sure. :D)


OMJ. Shampoo bottles. *chuckles to self* High five.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

YAY! IM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO SAYS OMJ!!!


message 5: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
*high five*


message 6: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Hahahahahaha.....that's funny...and thanks Kenny!!!! Cool Tate....yeah I have to have people knock me out before I will listen to them that my work is good. Anyways....thanks...I will show you some of my work...I am trying to get the "Arsenal's Son" done. ((I like to write horrors/fantasy...but in the "Arsenal's Son" I'm trying to actually write realistically without the vampires and such. :D Not that I actually write about vampires but you get the gist.)) I have trouble with romance so I don't even bother....right Kenny? *wink wink*


message 7: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
*hugs Jamie* De rien.

*laughs* But I enjoy the weird romance thing we've got going. *snorts with laughter*

Ew. I snorted.


message 8: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Hahahahahahah *grins* I know...the romance in our Rp is really funny and twisted!!!


message 9: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
But it's so cute!


message 10: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Hahahaha...thanks. :D I'll work on that when I get a chance...right now I'm taken up by forensic homework....but....still it's because of forensics that I am able to better my writing with the "Arsenal's Son." It deals with police and murder so it helps to know what really goes on with police and such. :D What kind of stories do you write tate? I know like...horror type....but I mean...is there romance in it...or what?


message 11: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
That's cute.


message 12: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Heheheh...sounds cool...what's your story about?


message 13: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Nice!!! That's truly awesome!!! Where did you get that idea from? What inspired you?


message 14: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Heheheh...so it's got sex in it? That's kind of funny....I don't know Twilight was always any annoying series...because it doesn't seem to fit together and it ends without anything really happening like she just lost her idea and left it at that....what do you think?


message 15: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Hahahahahaha....that's hilarious!!! I understand though. I write a lot of my dialogue by talking with my family and actually getting into the part. I know what my characters are going to say but sometimes I have trouble. I see not erotic...good good...cause if I read it I don't want to find myself squirming with terror!!! ((Funny part is I find lovie dovey romance more terrorizing than actual horror. Sad I know....)) That's great...what you do with your characters....being able to create realistic personalities is sometimes hard for people... :D


message 16: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......that is hilarious!!!!! I feel sorry that you have to deal with that!!! How old are you by the way? If you don't mind my asking.


message 17: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
I see...and who is Rebecca in the story? ((By the way...you are young!!! :D It's a good age...and by your personality I would have thought you were younger))


message 18: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
Tate wrote: "The one I get questioned about the most is Potter. He is real, he's 25 years old. he looks just like his description in the book (tattoo's, mohawk, piercings and all). What I didn't count on was th..."

*giggles* That's hilarious. And his name rocks.


message 19: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Hahahahahaha.....I'm sure you do look young!!! As long as you feel young you are far from being old!!! Nice....just needed to make sure I wasn't mixing up the characters. Though when I hear the name Potter it reminds me of Harry Potter...but since the description is totally different!!! I think it's awesome!!! It's bringing the name back to justice!!!


message 20: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
I need a copy to read. :D I...haven't had much reading time...or book shopping time....if you understand....I've been busy...but I do want to read it...I just need a copy. :D


message 21: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
Jamie wrote: "I need a copy to read. :D I...haven't had much reading time...or book shopping time....if you understand....I've been busy...but I do want to read it...I just need a copy. :D"

Same here. :D


message 22: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
I give you my word that I will never show it to anyone!!! Or let anyone else read it!!!


message 23: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
Tate wrote: "send me your email address to bloodthirstseries@yahoo.com and I'll send you a PDF copy but only if you SWEAR not to let anyone else read it or post it on the internet."

Me too, or just Jamie?


message 24: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments Fine, you too. Do you also pinky swear not to share the book with others?


message 25: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments You two will be the only ones who have ever gotten a free copy.


message 26: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
Tate wrote: "Fine, you too. Do you also pinky swear not to share the book with others?"

I promise to God I will not share it. (And I'll pinky swear too, if that'll make you feel better.)

THANK-YOU so much, Tate!


message 27: by Tate (last edited Oct 19, 2010 01:25PM) (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments No problem. send me your email address.


message 28: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments Jamie, check you inbox, you should have it.


message 29: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
I just sent it. :D


message 30: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments Kenny, just sent it. Check your email, it should be there.


message 31: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments Jamie. You have to send me some of your stuff, too. I won't share it with anyone and I'll give you an honest opinion. I'll give you my opinion by email if you want.


message 32: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
I did. Thanks, Tate. *smiles*


message 33: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments Hope you both like it. I know the first couple aren't very funny but keep reading. It gets better, I swear.


message 34: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
I believe you. I'll probably start reading it on Friday.


message 35: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Okay...sorry...I can't always get on the computer immediately!!! But I want you to know that I will send you some of my stories!!! Honest opinion by email sounds great!!! ((Less embarrassing to me)) I apologize that I didn't answer right away.....and I have read some of your story so far....IT'S ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! I don't like for people to use hard core swear words but how you do it is actually really hilarious and I love Bev!!! She sounds just like my sister Seth!!! "The man" is awesome....although a little to elegant for my taste...even the way he....you know...to....that boy.


message 36: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
I read some too. :D It was FAB. I am really enjoying the story thus far.


message 37: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Fab....hahahaha...that word or rather word abbreviation is funny!!!


message 38: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
I lurve it. :D


message 39: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Hahahahahha......I know... :D So Tate...I'm now a fan of yours!!! Of course I still need to finish reading the book but still :D


message 40: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments In Richards defense the...boy, deseved what he got and Richard get a little less elegant as the story goes on.


message 41: by Ky, DON'T. (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 1139 comments Mod
I love the way he talks. :D And that he still called her "Little One".


message 42: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Cool cool....I know...what I was saying is that I would have done worse....Richard was too nice. :D


message 43: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments He does do worse. You'll see.


message 44: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Then I think I'll like him. :D So you wanted to write another book and that is why you needed ideas?


message 45: by Tate (last edited Oct 20, 2010 01:58PM) (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments Pretty much. Don't get me wrong, I have alot of ideas (most days)and I've actually written about 200 pages of Blood Thirst so far. I just think it could use a little 'something'. Becky (that edited my book) wanted to kill me when I told her that I asked the people on Goodreads for ideas. She said 'You don't need any outside help, we're doing just fine on our own'. I told her that may be true but I'd like to here some ideas from people that have read the book. I thought it would be fun to hear what people would like to see happen next and it would be fun for the fans if they see their idea come to fruition. Plus being added as a character is preety cool too.


message 46: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Well I'm sure you could do well by yourself. You are a great writer as it is. :D Still if you want ideas...it doesn't hurt...if I were a character....hehehehe...that would be interesting....I guess in a way it's good I'm not in a book. I'm a little crazy.


message 47: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments Trust me, all the people that my characters are based on are crazy. You'd fit right in!


message 48: by Jamie, SPARKLE. (new)

Jamie (jamie1elizabeth) | 1308 comments Mod
Hahahahahahaha....well that's a relief...I'd be the fighter type who wouldn't stand for anything. I wonder what kind of night creature I'd be....probably not a vampire...perhaps a werewolf...I don't know. What do you think?


message 49: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments A Valkyrie. Check it out on wikipedia and see what you think.


message 50: by Tate (new)

Tate Jackson (tatejackson) | 20 comments Did you like the idea of the Valkyrie. They're females who flew above battlefields deciding who was going to live or die. Some say the Valkyrie were beautiful some say they were ugly. I prefer to think that women flying thru the air on horses would be beautiful warrior women.


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