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Jamie, SPARKLE.
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Oct 12, 2010 01:44PM

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Cool.....I am writing a few stories myself....though unlike you I don't have the ability or patience to finish it ((I'm too much a perfectionist)) but I plan on getting some books together. I would be interested in reading your story....but here's a question....can you read what I have written? I would like to know what opinions people have about my writing. I am very bad with punctuation and grammar but all in all I'm not too bad if you are interested. ;D Up to you though.
You're right, Tate. Jamie is an awesome writer. I've read some of her stuff. (Not all, I'm sure. :D)
OMJ. Shampoo bottles. *chuckles to self* High five.
OMJ. Shampoo bottles. *chuckles to self* High five.
YAY! IM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO SAYS OMJ!!!
Hahahahahaha.....that's funny...and thanks Kenny!!!! Cool Tate....yeah I have to have people knock me out before I will listen to them that my work is good. Anyways....thanks...I will show you some of my work...I am trying to get the "Arsenal's Son" done. ((I like to write horrors/fantasy...but in the "Arsenal's Son" I'm trying to actually write realistically without the vampires and such. :D Not that I actually write about vampires but you get the gist.)) I have trouble with romance so I don't even bother....right Kenny? *wink wink*
*hugs Jamie* De rien.
*laughs* But I enjoy the weird romance thing we've got going. *snorts with laughter*
Ew. I snorted.
*laughs* But I enjoy the weird romance thing we've got going. *snorts with laughter*
Ew. I snorted.
Hahahaha...thanks. :D I'll work on that when I get a chance...right now I'm taken up by forensic homework....but....still it's because of forensics that I am able to better my writing with the "Arsenal's Son." It deals with police and murder so it helps to know what really goes on with police and such. :D What kind of stories do you write tate? I know like...horror type....but I mean...is there romance in it...or what?
Heheheh...so it's got sex in it? That's kind of funny....I don't know Twilight was always any annoying series...because it doesn't seem to fit together and it ends without anything really happening like she just lost her idea and left it at that....what do you think?
Hahahahahaha....that's hilarious!!! I understand though. I write a lot of my dialogue by talking with my family and actually getting into the part. I know what my characters are going to say but sometimes I have trouble. I see not erotic...good good...cause if I read it I don't want to find myself squirming with terror!!! ((Funny part is I find lovie dovey romance more terrorizing than actual horror. Sad I know....)) That's great...what you do with your characters....being able to create realistic personalities is sometimes hard for people... :D
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......that is hilarious!!!!! I feel sorry that you have to deal with that!!! How old are you by the way? If you don't mind my asking.
I see...and who is Rebecca in the story? ((By the way...you are young!!! :D It's a good age...and by your personality I would have thought you were younger))
Tate wrote: "The one I get questioned about the most is Potter. He is real, he's 25 years old. he looks just like his description in the book (tattoo's, mohawk, piercings and all). What I didn't count on was th..."
*giggles* That's hilarious. And his name rocks.
*giggles* That's hilarious. And his name rocks.
Hahahahahaha.....I'm sure you do look young!!! As long as you feel young you are far from being old!!! Nice....just needed to make sure I wasn't mixing up the characters. Though when I hear the name Potter it reminds me of Harry Potter...but since the description is totally different!!! I think it's awesome!!! It's bringing the name back to justice!!!
I need a copy to read. :D I...haven't had much reading time...or book shopping time....if you understand....I've been busy...but I do want to read it...I just need a copy. :D
Jamie wrote: "I need a copy to read. :D I...haven't had much reading time...or book shopping time....if you understand....I've been busy...but I do want to read it...I just need a copy. :D"
Same here. :D
Same here. :D
Tate wrote: "send me your email address to bloodthirstseries@yahoo.com and I'll send you a PDF copy but only if you SWEAR not to let anyone else read it or post it on the internet."
Me too, or just Jamie?
Me too, or just Jamie?
Tate wrote: "Fine, you too. Do you also pinky swear not to share the book with others?"
I promise to God I will not share it. (And I'll pinky swear too, if that'll make you feel better.)
THANK-YOU so much, Tate!
I promise to God I will not share it. (And I'll pinky swear too, if that'll make you feel better.)
THANK-YOU so much, Tate!


Okay...sorry...I can't always get on the computer immediately!!! But I want you to know that I will send you some of my stories!!! Honest opinion by email sounds great!!! ((Less embarrassing to me)) I apologize that I didn't answer right away.....and I have read some of your story so far....IT'S ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! I don't like for people to use hard core swear words but how you do it is actually really hilarious and I love Bev!!! She sounds just like my sister Seth!!! "The man" is awesome....although a little to elegant for my taste...even the way he....you know...to....that boy.
Hahahahahha......I know... :D So Tate...I'm now a fan of yours!!! Of course I still need to finish reading the book but still :D

Cool cool....I know...what I was saying is that I would have done worse....Richard was too nice. :D
Then I think I'll like him. :D So you wanted to write another book and that is why you needed ideas?

Well I'm sure you could do well by yourself. You are a great writer as it is. :D Still if you want ideas...it doesn't hurt...if I were a character....hehehehe...that would be interesting....I guess in a way it's good I'm not in a book. I'm a little crazy.
Hahahahahahaha....well that's a relief...I'd be the fighter type who wouldn't stand for anything. I wonder what kind of night creature I'd be....probably not a vampire...perhaps a werewolf...I don't know. What do you think?