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STARTING STORY, I HAVE THE FIRST COUPLE OF CHAPTERS SO FAR...TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK?
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I really loved this. It's intriguing and I'm totally hooked.However, the point of view is a little confusing to follow and there's a little bit of redundancy. But both of these problems can be fixed fairly easily with some proofreading.
I like the story. It's great and I can't help wondering where it'll go. Keep it up!
thank you :) i had another friend tell me about the same thing about the past tense lol...what does redundacy mean>?
should i make it past tense or present?
Present tense is always the best, in my opinion. And the easiest.And ignore (for now) what I said about redundancy.
:) thank you... The story is supposed to be about 4 girls who are COMPLETELY the opposite and are not friends who , on halloween night, together get gifted different powers for some reason becasue the found a book and said a spell and stool on a full moon in a circle in the middle of the "special" place in the forest. And since they siad the spell on that exact day they set free all these evil creators..... and i cant say anyumore that will give away..But im trying to introduce every character first soo JADE was my first and i need more names... and characters sooo im still not donme
Celeste wrote: "i just need an opinion or if you like it so far.. i know its a little hard to tell what its about so far but dont worry i know exactly what im doing...i just need some backfeed so far because im de..."
I'll try to read what you have tonight. XD I'll probably only get the first chapter in though but yay for new ideas. Although this is new as of October. Are you still working on it?
I'll try to read what you have tonight. XD I'll probably only get the first chapter in though but yay for new ideas. Although this is new as of October. Are you still working on it?
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