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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Hello! Because my story is kind of lengthy, I'm just going to post the link to read it on here.


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


pleaseeeeeee give me constructive critism!


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

:P


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

lol. kk. i'm not even closeeeee to being done!


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

im serious! i know exactly how it's going to end, but i just dont know what's goint to happen neeeext!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

really??? cool! thank you! it gets soooo much better! i really hope you like it!


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

haha! okay. i just read Tied Up and omg!!! go write more! like, right about now! go go go! loved it


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

yay! i'm psyched!


message 8: by Amaranta, I might be insane, but then again, what writer isn't? (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 346 comments Mod
'"Both!” Pedophile alert! “He lives right next door and to make it better, he goes to your school and is the star penny back!" She clapped her hands and squealed like a little school girl. Wow.'
Lmao!!! I can't breath from laughing so hard!


message 9: by Annabelle (new)

Annabelle (mrs-varen-nethers) | 121 comments It's so long! Started to read but now I have to go read more Brave New World. Ugh. I'd much rather read your writing.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

New chapters! Yay! This is going to be very long. I really want to get it published. Like, you have no idea how much I want to get this book published. I'm set on doing it. My old teacher got her's published (which I have read parts of. very good. very good.) so I think I should be able to. I hope...


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

I have a million new chapters. And it's really exciting! I'm so psyched! I like, had a heart attack whilst writing it!


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

I have a new short story!

It's really sad... Depressing... Again. It's something that my friend went through. Well, kind of. So, pretty please read!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

Just chose from the list!

Thank you soooo much!


message 13: by Jen (new)

Jen | 154 comments WOW! I just read "But Sometimes People Lie" and I am speechless. It was AMAZING--you did a really great job.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Awwwww! Thanks! :D


message 15: by Jen (new)

Jen | 154 comments ur welcome :P


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm really in the writing mood. just wrote another chappie. pretty please read my story!


message 17: by Annabelle (new)

Annabelle (mrs-varen-nethers) | 121 comments I love "The Night He Left Me." It made me cry…


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Aw! Yay! Well, yay for me, because that means I did well. Yay! I'm sorry I made you cry, though! :(


message 19: by Annabelle (new)

Annabelle (mrs-varen-nethers) | 121 comments Oh, it's fine…I just wish things had been different, ya know?


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

Like, was it bad? Do I need to change anything? I based this off of something that happened to my friend. My friend Matt committed suicide so... yeah.


message 21: by Annabelle (new)

Annabelle (mrs-varen-nethers) | 121 comments No, it's fine, the ending just got me down a little. But keep it, the story wouldn't be the same without it… really, keep it.


message 22: by Annabelle (new)

Annabelle (mrs-varen-nethers) | 121 comments My friend committed suicide too. I don't think I'll ever be over it.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah, same here. It was really hard for me to write. I'm not getting over the death of my friend. Ever.


message 24: by Annabelle (new)

Annabelle (mrs-varen-nethers) | 121 comments Yeah, I know how you feel.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Yep. :'( it's even worse when it's your pastor. you're rolemodel. your best friend. sigh. I feel a new story coming on.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

New story!

"Dreams" was based of my friend, and what I would imagine is going on in her head. But also me. It's just something personal about what I wish would be reality. Yeah...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I really like this one, and I hope you do, too. Thanks.


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

New chapter for "He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not"!!! Just don't kill me after you read it!


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

I have four short stories now!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

If you truly are amazing, you will read these! I'm very proud of them, and I hope you guys love them. "The Night He Left Me" is my favorite, but "Dreams" is close in second.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

New chapter for "He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not"!!! I hope you guys enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Happy Thanksgiving to my favorite group with my favorite people! Hope your day is amazing and filled with turkey!


message 31: by Amaranta, I might be insane, but then again, what writer isn't? (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 346 comments Mod
And four different types of pie! Thanks Kaylin, I'm really glad you like this group so much. Happy Thanksgiving to you too.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

:D

You guys, I have Writer's Block. And if you know anything about me, that's basically me giving up . So... yeah. I'm going to go and walk around somewhere and hopefully get inspired by something to continue "He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not". K, bye!


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Heeeey! I have officially ended "He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not". Well, not yet. So really, it isn't official. :/ But I just posted another chapter, and after this, The. Very. Last. Chapter!!!! :O


message 34: by Amaranta, I might be insane, but then again, what writer isn't? (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 346 comments Mod
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Wait will it be over as in the book is done or over as in your giving up on it??? Please tell me it's the first one.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

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Lol!


message 36: by Amaranta, I might be insane, but then again, what writer isn't? (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 346 comments Mod
Yes you scared me! Don't do that again!


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Haha! That was my intention! But I won't do it again. Pinky swear!


message 38: by Amaranta, I might be insane, but then again, what writer isn't? (new)

Amaranta (foreverreader) | 346 comments Mod
Good. So is there a sequel to look forward to?


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, I just posted the last chapter!!!! Eeek! I'm so excited for people to read it! And there is an Ending Note/Author's Note at the end for you to read! Hope you like it!


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey hey! I just posted the prologue to the Sequel of He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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