Writer Group discussion

Well, I really need your opinion on my story, "Beyond". I'm not done... Tell me what you think, and suggestions, questions, comments, whatever. Should I keep 'em comin'?

i've been reading ur story, fiona, and it's really good! XD
haha. my sister's name is fiona... ANYWAY, yeah. so in my opinion, your story is awesome. ;D keep on writing!

good stuff... haven't gotten the time to finish it, but i'm a workin on it! haha